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Between 2 Cars

My '90 Dodge Daytona sat Broken down On Horseblock Road. We hitchhiked east To Kelly’s induction, Embarrassingly tardy. The trucks were leaving Ashes were spreading And 16 people stood Broken down Outside the service. Sean, Laura and I approached. We made 19 Peers in formal wear Feuding for space Between 2 cars. Packed with living friends, We found our way back home. Sean’s flag stood through his window, Guiding and mediating, So nowadays I try to reason with atheists. I’ll never forget returning to my Dodge. It started and drove without a flaw, And I felt like I had aced a test.

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Date: 5/12/2010 12:03:00 PM
Very well written. I love the type of story it describes and the circumstances you went through, to get to your destination.
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Date: 5/6/2010 9:16:00 PM
ENJOYED THIS WRITE TONIGHT
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