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BETWEEN

BETWEEN ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ autumn's breath slips between ember and ice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Nicely done, Sara. Perfectly captured. :) gw
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 4:23 PM
thanks, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 2:51 PM
bravo ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 4:23 PM
many thanks
DiMino Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 2:45 AM
Great imagery! Well done.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 4:23 PM
awww, thank you Joe
Sharma Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 2:29 AM
My hearts lets out a sigh........ such a mesmerizing poem
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 4:24 PM
awww, thank you. Your comments touched my poetic soul
Rose  Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 6:57 PM
lovely vibrantly described
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 4:24 PM
thanks, sweet Rose!
Hind Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 3:28 PM
Haunting image
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 4:24 PM
thank you!
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