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“I’m familiar with the fact that you are going to ignore this problem until it swims up and bites you on the a$$.” —Jaws (Hooper) idyllic setting. deep blue and Betty— flotsam of the sea. submarine cruising— its teeth for chewing curious mor-soul. 3/26/2021 not for contest

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Date: 3/31/2021 9:26:00 AM
great invented word Mor-soul!! Love that word play. Hope this was a winner.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2021 12:38:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 3/29/2021 10:20:00 PM
love the rhythm in this great verse, Kim.. sure a winner. <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2021 1:40:00 PM
Thanks, Eve :)
Date: 3/29/2021 8:59:00 PM
My, my 'Sub Marina,' what big teeth you have for chew wing! lol. Cute! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2021 1:40:00 PM
LOL, Gershon!
Date: 3/27/2021 12:14:00 PM
Ooh, Betty is soon to become shark-chow, I fear. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2021 3:13:00 PM
Could be...unless...she sits very still.
Date: 3/27/2021 8:48:00 AM
Ooohoo! This pic gives me the willies. Good job her. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2021 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Judy! Not a situation I would want to be in!
Date: 3/27/2021 4:15:00 AM
I love the mor-soul bit, lol,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2021 4:56:00 AM
Thank you, Rose!
Date: 3/26/2021 9:17:00 PM
I grinned at that last line (maybe a shark grin?) Delicious!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2021 4:56:00 AM
LOL! :)
Date: 3/26/2021 9:13:00 PM
So lovely with just few words! Enjoyed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2021 4:56:00 AM
Thank you, JCB!
Date: 3/26/2021 8:34:00 PM
Would make a fine entry. I think it would place pretty high on the podium, Kim. I enjoyed it. Very descriptive.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2021 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Milton! :)
Date: 3/26/2021 5:21:00 PM
That is one thing I do not want to see coming after me when I am in the water. Decent write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2021 6:21:00 PM
Couldn’t resist. I’m with you...no way!