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Betty Be Floating

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“I’m familiar with the fact that you are going to ignore this problem until it swims up and bites you on the a$$.” —Jaws (Hooper) idyllic setting. deep blue and Betty— flotsam of the sea. submarine cruising— its teeth for chewing curious mor-soul. 3/26/2021 not for contest

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/31/2021 9:26:00 AM
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great invented word Mor-soul!! Love that word play. Hope this was a winner.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2021 12:38:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea!
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/29/2021 10:20:00 PM
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love the rhythm in this great verse, Kim.. sure a winner. <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2021 1:40:00 PM
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Thanks, Eve :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/29/2021 8:59:00 PM
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My, my 'Sub Marina,' what big teeth you have for chew wing! lol. Cute! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2021 1:40:00 PM
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LOL, Gershon!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/27/2021 12:14:00 PM
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Ooh, Betty is soon to become shark-chow, I fear. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2021 3:13:00 PM
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Could be...unless...she sits very still.
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/27/2021 8:48:00 AM
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Ooohoo! This pic gives me the willies. Good job her. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2021 3:11:00 PM
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Thank you, Judy! Not a situation I would want to be in!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/27/2021 4:15:00 AM
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I love the mor-soul bit, lol,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2021 4:56:00 AM
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Thank you, Rose!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/26/2021 9:17:00 PM
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I grinned at that last line (maybe a shark grin?) Delicious!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2021 4:56:00 AM
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LOL! :)
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Jcb Brul
Date: 3/26/2021 9:13:00 PM
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So lovely with just few words! Enjoyed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2021 4:56:00 AM
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Thank you, JCB!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/26/2021 8:34:00 PM
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Would make a fine entry. I think it would place pretty high on the podium, Kim. I enjoyed it. Very descriptive.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2021 8:40:00 PM
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Thank you, Milton! :)
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Robert Pettit
Date: 3/26/2021 5:21:00 PM
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That is one thing I do not want to see coming after me when I am in the water. Decent write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2021 6:21:00 PM
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Couldn’t resist. I’m with you...no way!

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