Betty

Betty was not very tall Her shoes seem to be small She walked with a limp Mistaken for a gimp Or an excess of alcohol

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/10/2024 11:47:00 AM

Karen, this is cute! Liked the last line as it was not expected...the sign of a very good limerick. You're making me smile!

Karen Jones
Date: 8/10/2024 12:06:00 PM

Glad you smile Duke and thanks!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/6/2024 6:42:00 PM

Maybe Betty was a 'gimpaholic!' ... Win one for the 'Gimper!' ~ Ronnie Reagan

Karen Jones
Date: 8/6/2024 6:49:00 PM

lol Gershon you are silly!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/6/2024 4:56:00 PM

I hope Betty is OK. Thanks for a poem about Betty.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/6/2024 5:21:00 PM

This poem is fiction dear heart. So sweet of you to be concerned.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/6/2024 3:54:00 AM

Poor Betty! I was limping around the other day…thankfully recovering. Back from vacation.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/6/2024 7:00:00 AM

Oh no get well soon! Hope you had fun Kim!