Better Than Gold

As I read your works and comment too,
Believe me that my words are true.
I tell the new lambs in the fold,
Dr. Ram's words are better than gold.

He is the first to read your poem,
He does not steer you far from home.
So far I haven't seen him scold.
Dr. Ram's words are better than gold.

A highly educated man,
Adopt his wisdom if you can.
He uses lovely words and bold.
Dr. Ram's words are better than gold.




(For Joe's contest)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Georges Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 1:05 PM
It's nice to see that someone can take a personal opinion, a sharing of wisdom, and just make it such a great read. It shows true skill.
Maverick Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 5:56 PM
thank you for the entry Joyce, thank you for the support.
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