Beautiful Scars Poet Limerick

Better Than Gold

Nick was a young man who was handsome, 
                    got stuck in a strange basement transom. 
                                          When trainer offered gold
                                              to be free, his wife told-
  “NO! THE VIEW'S WORTH MORE THAN THE RANSOM!"





*How I feel about my handsome hubby. I love all his views…*

Transom- A strengthening crossbar, in particular one set above above a door or hanging from the ceiling. 

Written: June 1, 2019
syllable count: 9-9-6-6-9
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Jan Allison August 19, 2019 at 3:12 PM Dropping back with my congratulations on your win luloo:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman August 19, 2019 at 2:03 PM Good one, Lu Loo! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich August 18, 2019 at 8:25 PM very nice one, LU Loo and I learned a great new word about transom. You are lucky to have such a nice "view" Congrats in my contest.

Jan Allison June 12, 2019 at 3:53 PM what a fun poem and a lovely tribute to Nick, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Beautiful Scars June 13, 2019 at 10:19 AM Lol thanks dear Jan! ;)- luloo

Connie Marcum Wong June 12, 2019 at 11:58 AM Congratulations on your deserving First Placement Luloo. Loved it! : ) Beautiful Scars June 13, 2019 at 10:19 AM Thank you Connie! :)-luloo

Beata Agustin June 12, 2019 at 7:00 AM Congrats. Great collaboration with your husband. God bless you!

Kim Rodrigues June 11, 2019 at 9:20 PM Too funny, Luloo! Congrats on first place!

Tania Kitchin June 11, 2019 at 6:59 PM Lu Loo, congratulations on your first place win with this sweet and humorous limerick, hope your hubby enjoyed this too! :)

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2019 at 6:55 PM very good one, sweetie, and thanks so much for the plaque in case you can't get to soupmail!! I love it.

Rico Leffanta June 1, 2019 at 3:33 PM Thanks for the first laugh this morning! Good luck! Aloha! Rico