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Better Than Gold

                 Nick was a young man who was handsome, 
                    got stuck in a strange basement transom. 
                                          When trainer offered gold
                                              to be free, his wife told-
  “NO! THE VIEW'S WORTH MORE THAN THE RANSOM!"





*How I feel about my handsome hubby. I love all his views…*

Transom- A strengthening crossbar, in particular one set above above a door or hanging from the ceiling. 

Written: June 1, 2019
syllable count: 9-9-6-6-9
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A Limerick, Old or New: Your personal favorite Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/19/2019 3:12:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your win luloo:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/19/2019 2:03:00 PM
Good one, Lu Loo! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 8/18/2019 8:25:00 PM
very nice one, LU Loo and I learned a great new word about transom. You are lucky to have such a nice "view" Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 6/12/2019 3:53:00 PM
what a fun poem and a lovely tribute to Nick, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/13/2019 10:19:00 AM
Lol thanks dear Jan! ;)- luloo
Date: 6/12/2019 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your deserving First Placement Luloo. Loved it! : )
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/13/2019 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Connie! :)-luloo
Date: 6/12/2019 7:00:00 AM
Congrats. Great collaboration with your husband. God bless you!
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Date: 6/11/2019 9:20:00 PM
Too funny, Luloo! Congrats on first place!
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Date: 6/11/2019 6:59:00 PM
Lu Loo, congratulations on your first place win with this sweet and humorous limerick, hope your hubby enjoyed this too! :)
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Date: 6/10/2019 6:55:00 PM
very good one, sweetie, and thanks so much for the plaque in case you can't get to soupmail!! I love it.
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Date: 6/1/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thanks for the first laugh this morning! Good luck! Aloha! Rico
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