Better Place

Your in the better place now but I want you here
But in the better place you cry no tears you have no fears
But I just want you here
Without any pain
But when your here everyday's a day without rain
Just like the better place
I'd love to again just see your face 
But times ticking fastly for us to re-unite
And times ticking more for the day too I will see the light
But your in the better place which is beyond high
so me being human can not touch the sky
But I wish I had wings like like those in the better place 
Because I would start elevating and leave no trace
So I can see you again and feel your warm embrace
but im not coming back for heaven is beautiful and great
I'm forever gone Out of state, I'm onto the better place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 9, 2016 at 12:56 AM
J Q J, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Love ~SKAT~ :)
Brown Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 7:16 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you J'Quan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 9:07 PM
Creative and expressiove thoughts, J'quan
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August 7, 2011 at 4:18 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write... enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..
Hughes Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 2:03 PM
this poem reminds me of the color purple because its not quite dark and its not quite light if u know what i mean
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August 6, 2011 at 10:48 PM
Beautiful write Mate....with love...old Jack
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