David Kavanagh Poet Limerick

Better Late Than

Last year Santa took a long time to come
The reindeer waited ages, and then some 
Rudolf got so snappy 
Mrs Claus was happy 
As his sack somehow didn't look so plump


By
David Kavanagh

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Arlo Parker November 29, 2022 at 10:30 AM Secret Santa not so secret after all! Jolly indeed! David Kavanagh November 29, 2022 at 10:53 AM Cats out of the bag Arlo, sorry I mean sack, lol, cheers David

Panagiota Romios November 21, 2022 at 3:25 AM David, this is a great one. Best wishes in the contest. Pangie David Kavanagh November 21, 2022 at 4:26 AM Thank you Pangie for stopping by, all a bit of fun when in Limerick land, cheers David

I Am Anaya November 19, 2022 at 5:38 PM I guess Jennas elf chimed Santas belles after all! This year, I'm giving it to someone special. David Kavanagh November 20, 2022 at 1:08 AM Lol, sounds about right Anaya, I was always led to believe Santa’s sack was a cornucopia, but perhaps Mrs Claus is the only one who can put a dent in it, cheers David

Charles Messina November 19, 2022 at 4:28 AM Happy wife, happy life...even in Santa Land. LOL Good Luck in the contest, Dave. Charlie David Kavanagh November 19, 2022 at 4:52 AM Never truer words Charlie! if Santa cannot keep his wife happy with that enormous sack of goods, what chance for us mere mortals lol, cheers David

Anselmo Boles November 18, 2022 at 6:41 PM Hahaha! My interpretation might be way out to left field I'll stay mum. Very funny, great job Dave!!...ab David Kavanagh November 19, 2022 at 12:27 AM Oh you know Anselmo when in Limerick land, we must follow our instincts, I think your interpretation is well within the bounds, I’m delighted you enjoyed the Hijinks, cheers David

Tom Cunningham November 17, 2022 at 10:21 AM At least she won't have to say, I'm washing my hair lol. Good luck David. Tom David Kavanagh November 17, 2022 at 10:32 AM Yeah Tom! sounds like he left plenty of toys behind to keep her amused for a while lol, cheers David