Paul Callus Poet Rhyme

Betsie Belle - Nursery Rhyme

Betsie tripped on spider silk
And kicked a can of milk 
But with aplomb this cow
Stood up and took a bow
And though her feet were wet
She did a perfect pirouette.

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Children Sing to Rhyme Contest
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© 1st April 2023

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Jack Horne June 5, 2023 at 5:51 AM LOL, a great one for the contest Paul Callus June 11, 2023 at 1:43 AM Thank you for the thumb's up my friend :) Incidentally, Eve has added this one to her Nursery Rhymes anthology. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos April 30, 2023 at 4:31 AM Hey Paul, this write gave me a giggle, so cute - congratulations my friend on your win. Hugs, warm regards and blessings, Jennifer. Paul Callus April 30, 2023 at 11:11 AM I'm pleased this gave you a giggle, Jenny...aim achieved :) Thank you for reading and commenting (and for the congrats). Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Joanna Daniel April 23, 2023 at 11:03 PM A fun one, Paul, belated congratulations:) Paul Callus April 26, 2023 at 5:53 AM Thank you for the visit and congrats, Joanna. Have a lovely day! // paul

Kim Rodrigues April 23, 2023 at 8:24 PM Too funny! Thanks for the laugh! Paul Callus April 26, 2023 at 5:45 AM Thank you Kim; glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 23, 2023 at 8:06 AM So glad this placed. it was one of my favorites in the contest Paul Callus April 23, 2023 at 10:04 AM Thank you, Andrea. I enjoy writing these nursery rhymes...and as I write I smile, laugh and grin :) Regards // paul

Bill Baker April 17, 2023 at 5:05 PM Very cute, especially for kids, Paul. Good luck in the contest! Bill Paul Callus April 19, 2023 at 11:35 AM Glad you enjoyed it, Bill ~ thank you and best regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos April 9, 2023 at 6:37 AM Cute, cute cute Paul, all the best in Eve's contest. the last two lines brought a smile to my face as i think of our 4 month old grand-daughter giggling her heart out by the time she is three years old. Paul Callus April 19, 2023 at 11:56 AM Thank you for your pleasant visit, Jenny. That young granddaughter of yours will keep you young and busy...I know mine did!! ~ Warm regards & hugs, my friend // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2023 at 2:33 AM - Congratulations on your win in the Nursery Rhyme contest, Paul :) - hugs Paul Callus April 19, 2023 at 11:22 AM Thank you once again for another lovely visit, Anne-Lise :) These Nursery rhymes are most enjoyable to write and read! Hugs // paul

Len Gasun April 7, 2023 at 9:30 PM I love this a lot. This is so cute and sweet nursery rhyme poem/song for children my dear poet friend. I'm pretty sure children will enjoy this immensely. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you and your loved ones this Holy Week and always. Paul Callus April 19, 2023 at 11:14 AM Thank you for the lovely feedback and Easter wishes, Len. I've been away for several days, and now am doing my best to get back in the groove :) Blessings // paul

Eve Roper April 7, 2023 at 5:11 PM Paul , congratulations on your win on your poem, “Betsie Belle". Many blessings to you. Hugs Eve Paul Callus April 19, 2023 at 11:12 AM Thank you for including my poem in the winners' list, Eve. I hope you had a lovely Easter. I spent mine in Rome; it was hectic but enjoyable. Blessings & Hugs // paul

Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2023 at 11:40 AM Congratulations on your win. This is so very cute. Love It. Have a blessed day................ Paul Callus April 19, 2023 at 11:09 AM Thank you, Paula. I'm still trying to catch up with a load of notifications. Regards & Blessings // paul

Valsa George April 3, 2023 at 5:14 AM Very cute and sweet ! Love the cow's pirouette ! All the Best dear Paul Paul Callus April 3, 2023 at 7:24 AM Thank you dear Valsa. My grandfather had cows on his farm, but none of them were interested in ballet :) ~ Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2023 at 4:14 PM this is ADORABLE> short and sweet makes it all the better Paul Callus April 3, 2023 at 7:16 AM Glad you liked it, Andrea :) Best regards // paul

Sara Kendrick April 2, 2023 at 4:12 AM Ahhh!! Cute one for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Paul Callus April 2, 2023 at 11:19 AM Pleased that you enjoyed it, Sara. Thank you for reading and commenting. Best regards // paul

Daniel Turner April 1, 2023 at 6:44 AM This is great Paul. a perfect nursery rhyme. A pleasure to read my friend. Well done! Have a wonderful weekend. Paul Callus April 1, 2023 at 11:07 AM Glad you enjoyed it, Danny. I've read your nursery rhyme offering and it was immensely enjoyed. Best regards, my friend. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2023 at 6:05 AM - Easy to learn for kids... and very sweet, Paul - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend and Easter :) - hugs Paul Callus April 1, 2023 at 11:06 AM Thank you on all counts, Anne-Lise. May you too have a lovely Easter :) Regards & Hugs // paul