Betrothment

Hey ho
sweet maiden
prithee tarry-
lack-a -day,anon we
marry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 1/4/2013 10:38:00 PM
a fun to read Cinqku, a sure winner, Brian. Stopping by to read a few poems on the down low. I miss reading the open poems. However, I'm glad i came across this lovely win. always~PD
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Date: 12/24/2008 9:56:00 AM
In less words you say much. Congratulations on your well deserved success. Always a pleasure and thanks a lot. Merry Christmas and blessings for the new year. Love, Chitra
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Date: 12/22/2008 6:45:00 AM
Brian - Congratulations my friend - You know Brian after holding a contest of my own i would appreciate it if you would allow me to send you one of my books also out of respect for all I have learned through your contest and the vast amount of time and effort you spend on them - please allow me this it is something I really want to do - My email is antoinette2332@sbcglobal.net shoot me your address please - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/21/2008 2:49:00 PM
Wonderful little poem, and I love the phrases you chose! Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest, and thank you always for your comments on my poetry! Happy holidays! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/21/2008 10:43:00 AM
Dear Brian - Congratulations on your WIN in Kristin's contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 12/21/2008 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations Brian for this skilled, sweet version of the Renassaince poetry! A well deserved win...loved this one! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/21/2008 6:41:00 AM
Warmest congrats dearest Brian on your win in Kristin's contest! Consistently amazing poetry and so well deserved! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 12/21/2008 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved Third Place Win in Kristin's inspirational contest. Best, Nigel
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Date: 11/22/2008 12:07:00 PM
Very nice Brian sound's like my plan . Have to find her first thnk you for yoour kindness Brian and your kind thoughts on my poem you are a true friend.
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Date: 11/20/2008 8:26:00 AM
A jaunty little poem, Brian! Enjoyable!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/20/2008 7:49:00 AM
Coolio Brian! ~lol~ Takes me back to my past life! : ) Well, at least to some books I've read which caused me to dream. Lovely! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/20/2008 6:18:00 AM
Your into this midevil write..maybe a past life(kidding) I am enjoying these write..Trying to get up the nerve to try it. Good one. BG
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Date: 11/20/2008 12:41:00 AM
Brian, Good morning I'm not the only POET up all night Great Cinku I zam not very good with them As with all YOUR POETRY an Excellent Piece LOVEYOUr POETIC TALENT...HG
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