Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

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Betrothed

betrothed to the breeze
heart-shaped leaves flutter down...
cupid's handiwork

sun weaves in and out
in flirtation with the clouds... 
love's light never dims

daylight fades quickly
yet, never my love for you...
will stars live so long?



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2/2/15 For PD.s Contest:

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MD Johnson March 31, 2015 at 11:54 AM Wonderfully crafted. Well done.

Robert Stoner Jr March 25, 2015 at 4:25 PM Congratulations on this fine top tier win Carrie, nicely done.

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2015 at 6:22 PM I loved the questionku, Carrie. Such a wonderful ending!! congrats.

Sasha Maharaj March 23, 2015 at 9:29 AM Congrats Carrie,, Beautiful piece indeed. :)

Constance La France March 22, 2015 at 4:40 PM Carrie, congratulations on your first place win in the contest with this beauty, a perfect 7 . . .

Paul Callus March 22, 2015 at 3:15 PM This is the essence of excellence, Carrie!! Captivating! No wonder it finished in first place...Congratulations! // paul

Poet Destroyer A March 22, 2015 at 1:42 PM Carrie, outstanding and my fav.... Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA

Skat A February 14, 2015 at 12:29 AM lovely haiku Carrie, :)Have yourself a sweet valentine's Day. ~SKAT LOVE~

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 7, 2015 at 10:29 AM perfecto. Nice Carrie. God bless>>>rajat

Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 4:01 PM such stunning imagery Carrie - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker February 2, 2015 at 6:48 PM The essence of love written like a delicate flower that gives its fragrance to the wind..good luck..you should do well...to answer your question stars burn out over time.Love is eternal..at least I hope it is