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betrothed to the breeze heart-shaped leaves flutter down... cupid's handiwork sun weaves in and out in flirtation with the clouds... love's light never dims daylight fades quickly yet, never my love for you... will stars live so long? ___________________________ 2/2/15 For PD.s Contest:

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MD Johnson

Date: 3/31/2015 11:54:00 AM

Wonderfully crafted. Well done.

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 3/25/2015 4:25:00 PM

Congratulations on this fine top tier win Carrie, nicely done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2015 6:22:00 PM

I loved the questionku, Carrie. Such a wonderful ending!! congrats.

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 3/23/2015 9:29:00 AM

Congrats Carrie,, Beautiful piece indeed. :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/22/2015 4:40:00 PM

Carrie, congratulations on your first place win in the contest with this beauty, a perfect 7 . . .

Paul Callus

Date: 3/22/2015 3:15:00 PM

This is the essence of excellence, Carrie!! Captivating! No wonder it finished in first place...Congratulations! // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2015 1:42:00 PM

Carrie, outstanding and my fav.... Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 2/14/2015 12:29:00 AM

lovely haiku Carrie, :)Have yourself a sweet valentine's Day. ~SKAT LOVE~

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/7/2015 10:29:00 AM

perfecto. Nice Carrie. God bless>>>rajat

Jan Allison

Date: 2/3/2015 4:01:00 PM

such stunning imagery Carrie - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/2/2015 6:48:00 PM

The essence of love written like a delicate flower that gives its fragrance to the wind..good luck..you should do well...to answer your question stars burn out over time.Love is eternal..at least I hope it is