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Betrayed By Her Heart (My Ending)

He knew his love betrayed him before he walked into the door Her nervous behavior indicated that she still loved him Or so he hoped. He dipped a finger in her glass and moistened her lips Before gently pressing his against her quivering mouth Her moan was enough He knew This was the moment When it would all be revealed The longing…. The passion…. He knew…. He had to see a doctor about his problem That made him reach the climax of mount Everest before the act of love…. originally Writen by Wilma Neels

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/29/2010 6:34:00 PM
A nice flight of imagination on love and its sentiments, Sidney
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Date: 8/29/2010 6:22:00 PM
U got me again Sidney... great last line... hope u have entered my Alliteration contest..only a few spots left to win a $50.00 visa gift card luv...
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Date: 8/29/2010 6:13:00 PM
Hehe see what I mean? You totally took it in a different direction, I love it! Shame poor guy the anticipation was just too much lol
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