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Betrayed

I met my love in early spring. He soon gave me a diamond ring. He proved so untrue As some lovers do. The ring was just a piece of bling. For Francine's "Wow Me In Five Lines" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/20/2011 4:57:00 PM
A good limerick. It's simplicity is outstanding! Nicely done. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/20/2011 3:23:00 PM
This happens all too often, Joyce. We have to be careful when we offer our hearts -- so many heartbreakers on the prowl. I do see the humor here, but it's dark humor and conveys your message well. Best wishes in Francine's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/20/2011 2:03:00 PM
a very creative Limerick, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Spring Time Follies
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Date: 4/19/2011 9:59:00 AM
this is very well written. I feel the same way you do that is why I want my name on the cover of a book. Not for the money, but to pass down to my kids and so on. Ill have my book one day.
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Date: 4/19/2011 9:20:00 AM
did your finger turn green?
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Date: 4/19/2011 9:03:00 AM
Good one, Joyce. If this is for the "Spring" contest, good luck to you. :)
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