Tania Kitchin Poet Rhyme

Betrayal - Mister Blue Eyes

You were a beautiful man with cobalt eyes so blue
            I wasn't looking to find love or anything like it
Then I saw you, your eyes sparkling, you smiled and then I knew
I was now taken by your beautiful looks and your wit
                        We went for coffee and had our first date the next day
I was so smitten instantly and wanted you to stay
You lured me into your bed, saying you loved me, had your way
      We met again for several more passionate dates
            I had no idea you lied and already had a mate
                        Then there was nothing, no contact, I did nothing but wait
My heart broken and my pride hurt, I shouldn't have trusted you
            Then I saw you that day with her at the local market
      Pretending to not know me while playing and flirting away
            I knew then I would have to tell her and change your fate

11/4/18

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Eve Roper December 4, 2018 at 7:36 PM I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, Andrea, very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination and the very sad emotions . Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France December 3, 2018 at 4:34 PM Tania, congratulations on your win in my contest, with this exceptional write, yes betrayal has a price ~ Tania Kitchin December 3, 2018 at 6:27 PM Thank you Constance for my placement, I liked your contest and the challenge it gave me to write in a new form!

CayCay Godwin November 10, 2018 at 12:18 PM Yes, tell her - the crouton deserves no mercy. How many will relate to this? Straight-fact told and delivered, great kick (for him) at the end. All the best ... CayCay Tania Kitchin November 10, 2018 at 4:15 PM Thank you CayCay!

Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2018 at 6:16 PM ooooh, you had to tell her!!! Some women would not do that but I rather enjoyed that ending there!! WEll done in the contest, Tania. This is one i am eager to try! Tania Kitchin November 6, 2018 at 8:36 PM Thank you Andrea!

Faraz Ajmal November 5, 2018 at 1:26 PM Such a beautiful and heartfelt write this is, there is nothing more painful than knowing that you were betrayed, used, and in reality that person hasn't got any emotions for you, such a thing can break you, but karma always plays its role, I really like the rwist in the end, that guy sure deserves it, I wiah you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day Tania Kitchin November 5, 2018 at 4:17 PM Thank you!