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Betrayal Begins With Trust

" ...betrayal begins with trust." Quote by Phish Being betrayed it destroys all trust, Always staying humble is a must. No thought the deed is to be repaid. It destroys all trust being betrayed. When you are hurting, your wounds are deep. When betrayal makes your climb so steep. Your faithful friends are now deserting. Your wounds are deep, when you are hurting. Faith’s an emotion, precious to give. Trust in a friend, the right way to live. Expect loyalty with devotion. Precious to give, faith’s an emotion. If you’re betrayed, stay strong, walk away. Don’t retaliate, no need to stay. Hard to forgive, God’s word you’ve obeyed. Stay strong, walk away, if you’re betrayed. Sponsor : Constance La France Contest Name : Writing Challenge - B Quotes – Swap Quatrain HMS : 9 Syllables per line. Theme : 2. " ...betrayal begins with trust." Quote by Phish 21st May 2023

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Date: 5/27/2023 9:29:00 AM
Merv, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, well done and congratulations !
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Date: 5/30/2023 10:42:00 PM
Constance, you have given me immense confidence. I am becoming kinda proud of myself. Thank you lass.
Date: 5/25/2023 4:01:00 PM
Hi Merv, Congratulations on your 1st place win-Alexis
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Date: 5/25/2023 11:53:00 PM
That is nice of you to congratulate me, Alexis. Thank you so much dear one.
Date: 5/23/2023 11:41:00 AM
Not ever so easy, or simple to follow, Lifes hits come when we are low ' Do we bow.? Or hit back..? The marks Will show ' in healing I advise its the Better way to go, forgive that a new you will grow.' Better days await, its so.'
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Date: 5/24/2023 4:22:00 AM
little ray of sunshine you are. G'donya.

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