Betrayal

Friend no more deceiver your betrayal like a sharp dagger thrust through my tender skin you were the rope that saved me when tidal waves crashed on my shore now, heartbroken, will I trust again?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lefanue Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 2:36 AM
Dear Rhonda, thank you for your kind comment. Your Betrayal poem is a sad one. We must continue to trust in life. I have been at the hands of a betrayer, and it's hard when that betrayer was your husband. However, we still need to continue to trust and move forward in life. Thank God he is always there to comfort us. God bless & Love, Maureen x
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February 18, 2012 at 8:43 PM
I believe the Lord is telling me something. You are the third person this week who has told me to move forward, to not live in the past. Then, tonight my pastor preached about moving forward. I think I need to do more than listen. Time for action. Thank you for the words of wisdom. Blessings, Rhonda
Horne Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 2:43 PM
Wow, powerful write indeed - I think we've all felt this way before
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Thanks, Jack!
Richards Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 8:51 PM
There is nothing worse, than being hurt by someone this close to one's heart. Well spoken in this heartbreaking poem!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 12:00 PM
Thank you, Carrie!!
Macmillan Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 6:48 PM
Sad one, Rhonda. The et tu Brutus is a hard one to get past. Hugs to you- Cyndi
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February 17, 2012 at 12:46 PM
I almost used the et tu Brutus line but thought it sounded predictable, a little cliche. Thanks for your kind comments, Rhonda :)
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