Doreen Cyr Poet Free verse

Betrayal

Loyal and blind, I believed in you.
A mother, even though not of birth.
Trusting your love and caring true.
I grieve as dead, feeling no worth.

Mourning with heavy heart and soul.
The clues of truth run through my mind.
Little things, telling things, won't let go.
Denial and disbelief, in thoughts do bind.

To know but not to believe, overlook.
I am to blame for this blind heart ache.
The signs ignored, years it took.
You can't hide now, you were a fake.

DOREEN CYR
SEPT. 11, 2010

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Doris Culverhouse October 10, 2010 at 7:41 PM sad thoughts... to be fake....what i am not me?? after all? oh well

Sylvia Coulstock October 10, 2010 at 3:19 PM Hi Doreen. So sad and yet somehow beautiful,the words and the way it reads.Betrayal so hard to forget let alone forgive.I don't know if this expressive of your own hurt or poetic empathy.But either way as I said this is beautiful.Thank you for sharing. luv June(Sylvia)

Peter Kyriakides October 10, 2010 at 12:18 PM Doreen your poetry is great ! hoping to read more soon. God Bless... Peter K

Matthew Anish September 23, 2010 at 1:36 PM Welcome to Poetry soup, Doreen. Your poem is quite fascinating and is really I couplet, I think. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Carol Sunshine Brown September 13, 2010 at 5:59 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Doreen. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A September 11, 2010 at 1:00 PM deep write and strong feelings in this, enjoyed your write today, best wishes for you this weekend..P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 11, 2010 at 12:31 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. soup offers many contests on site.. check them out to enter and good luck..with luv..

Diane Locksley September 11, 2010 at 9:22 AM Hi Doreen, It sounds like you've experienced a lot of pain from this deception. There are a lot of deceivers out there, but I hope you find someone who is sincere. (I'm new here, too, and they have some fun contests you can enter.) Take care, Diane

Dory Chrest September 11, 2010 at 9:12 AM First of all, sis, welcome to the Soup! I love this denouement...bitter and biting but fair.....you always have such a wonderful way of expressing yourself...*hugz* Dory