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Betrayal

Like a mirage, to see The dreams seem nice Until, words turn to ice After believing in thee Something seems like a sturdy rock Trusting to be able to stand Not expecting the other hand, to bring deceipt with a knock There are signs along the way, often easy to ignore Unwilling to open the door Then a final blow has the say As it's not healthy, it's best to leave For whatever reason was the start Now, much better to be apart Time to let go with the chance to grieve Heidi Sands 6/15/24 (C)opyright

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Date: 6/16/2024 8:38:00 PM
I enjoyed the rhyme and the important message defining when to leave! Powerful Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2024 2:19:00 AM
Thank you Karen :)
Date: 6/16/2024 7:30:00 PM
That second stanza knocked me for a loop, Heidi. Powerful penning! ~ Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2024 2:19:00 AM
Thank you Gershon :)

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