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Betray Mute

. Essentially noble mine honorable resolve became moot when hern shared mine lewd for my desire of her snips to molt for mine eyne to sustain hern glabrous Yesss the turgid affinity of the succulent nectarine yesss bursting betraying mute

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/8/2009 12:28:00 PM
great recommendation james , perfect and breathtaking , keep it up :)
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Date: 9/12/2009 12:54:00 AM
Have a good weekend James and thanks for your encouraing comments.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/11/2009 3:23:00 PM
The Peach,the pulp,the apple.....your words betraying your silence....romantic,very romantic...Charma
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Date: 9/11/2009 9:55:00 AM
Beautiful rhythm here, James. I look forward to reading more of your writings.
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Date: 9/11/2009 4:29:00 AM
Very descriptive Lyric. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2009 3:27:00 AM
Yes betraying mute..passing the silent phase...an edible peach.persian apple..must be delightful to your eyes,nice poem ,Celina
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