James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Betray Mute

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       Essentially noble
 mine honorable  resolve
        became moot
 when hern shared mine
              lewd

    for my desire of her
             snips
            to molt
for mine eyne to sustain
       hern glabrous

             Yesss
    the turgid affinity
     of the succulent
          nectarine

             yesss

           bursting
      betraying mute

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Noura Nagy December 8, 2009 at 12:28 PM great recommendation james , perfect and breathtaking , keep it up :)

Brian Strand September 12, 2009 at 12:54 AM Have a good weekend James and thanks for your encouraing comments.Rgds Brian

Charmaine Chircop September 11, 2009 at 3:23 PM The Peach,the pulp,the apple.....your words betraying your silence....romantic,very romantic...Charma

Sue Mason September 11, 2009 at 9:55 AM Beautiful rhythm here, James. I look forward to reading more of your writings.

Sara Kendrick September 11, 2009 at 4:29 AM Very descriptive Lyric. Keep writing. Sara

C.C Bloomsfield September 11, 2009 at 3:27 AM Yes betraying mute..passing the silent phase...an edible peach.persian apple..must be delightful to your eyes,nice poem ,Celina