Bestow On My Lover

Let my beloved be
With her tender passion that dances to her heartbeats
As her beauty sings to her heartbeats
And with longing thirst of love for me to see

Let my beloved continue to live
With her glowing skin and dazzling eyes that illuminate pitch black rooms
And her beauty that makes flowers grieve
Allow the nights to bestow on her, more love for me her groom

Let my beloved forever own
The mesmerizing smell of sprouting lilacs
And the shape which make bees buzz and butterflies groan
With emotions for me, make her mind forever dark


January 3, 2016



Contest: combination of three words: dancing, pitch black room, smell of lilacs
Sponsored by: Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Amazing the excellence that can come from three phrases..Congrats on your winning phrases..Sara
Sage Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 2:20 PM
thanks Sara
Selfa Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:22 AM
Congratulations for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You truly deserve the win! :) -hans
Sage Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 9:11 AM
thanks Hansteven
A   Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 11:12 PM
Hi White Sage Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~ .
Sage Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 2:29 AM
thanks Linda
Kimathi Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 7:34 AM
Hi White Sage. Congrats for your placement in the contest! ;-)
Sage Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 8:27 AM
thanks for coming by Teddy
Shahein Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Congratulations on ur win with this remarkable poem, enjoyed every little word of it....hugs / / :) dalia
A  Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 10:33 AM
WHITE SAGE, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
Sage Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:51 PM
thanks Skat
Scars Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 12:30 PM
White Sage, thank you for participating in my contest! Have a blessed day:)-luloo
Sage Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 3:52 PM
thanks Laura, its my pleasure
White Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 11:10 AM
I love this WS passion,blinded by the aroma,beauty what a gift.
Sage Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 3:01 PM
thanks Kelli, its a pleasure having you come by
Manassian Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 12:52 AM
Beautiful....I love romance. You've done this well. Good luck in the contest...
Sage Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:00 AM
Thanks Eileen
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 7:40 PM
I love how you did your entry, white sage. I too loved these particular words the best!
Sage Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 7:49 PM
thanks for coming by Andrea
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