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Bestow On My Lover

Let my beloved be
With her tender passion that dances to her heartbeats
As her beauty sings to her heartbeats
And with longing thirst of love for me to see

Let my beloved continue to live
With her glowing skin and dazzling eyes that illuminate pitch black rooms
And her beauty that makes flowers grieve
Allow the nights to bestow on her, more love for me her groom

Let my beloved forever own
The mesmerizing smell of sprouting lilacs
And the shape which make bees buzz and butterflies groan
With emotions for me, make her mind forever dark


January 3, 2016



Contest: combination of three words: dancing, pitch black room, smell of lilacs
Sponsored by: Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/12/2016 11:17:00 AM
Amazing the excellence that can come from three phrases..Congrats on your winning phrases..Sara
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White Sage
Date: 1/12/2016 2:20:00 PM
thanks Sara
Date: 1/12/2016 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You truly deserve the win! :) -hans
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Date: 1/12/2016 9:11:00 AM
thanks Hansteven
Date: 1/10/2016 11:12:00 PM
Hi White Sage Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~ .
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White Sage
Date: 1/11/2016 2:29:00 AM
thanks Linda
Date: 1/6/2016 7:34:00 AM
Hi White Sage. Congrats for your placement in the contest! ;-)
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White Sage
Date: 1/6/2016 8:27:00 AM
thanks for coming by Teddy
Date: 1/4/2016 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations on ur win with this remarkable poem, enjoyed every little word of it....hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:33:00 AM
WHITE SAGE, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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White Sage
Date: 1/4/2016 3:51:00 PM
thanks Skat
Date: 1/3/2016 12:30:00 PM
White Sage, thank you for participating in my contest! Have a blessed day:)-luloo
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White Sage
Date: 1/3/2016 3:52:00 PM
thanks Laura, its my pleasure
Date: 1/3/2016 11:10:00 AM
I love this WS passion,blinded by the aroma,beauty what a gift.
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White Sage
Date: 1/3/2016 3:01:00 PM
thanks Kelli, its a pleasure having you come by
Date: 1/3/2016 12:52:00 AM
Beautiful....I love romance. You've done this well. Good luck in the contest...
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White Sage
Date: 1/3/2016 1:00:00 AM
Thanks Eileen
Date: 1/2/2016 7:40:00 PM
I love how you did your entry, white sage. I too loved these particular words the best!
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White Sage
Date: 1/2/2016 7:49:00 PM
thanks for coming by Andrea

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