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lies plied between us

                             the glue beneath our veneer

                                  secrets behind smiles






12/26/18

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Susan Ashley

April 14, 2019 at 6:15 PM

Oh, such a dark potent pen, Mo. The deep implicit tone is so intriguing. Congratulations on your wonderful win, lovely. Warmest wishes always.. Susan

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 17, 2019 at 7:30 AM

Thank you Lovely :) xomo!

Line Gauthier

April 13, 2019 at 12:03 PM

Powerful lines, Maureen. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 17, 2019 at 7:30 AM

Thank you Line xomo <3

Paul Marc

April 13, 2019 at 9:50 AM

Very true ~ congrats on your win :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 17, 2019 at 7:29 AM

Thank you P.M. (congrats to you too If I recall correctly, I'm way behind on my reading) xomo

Joseph May

April 13, 2019 at 8:14 AM

Lips soon become unglued!..Congrats on a fine win Mo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 13, 2019 at 9:39 AM

Holy macaroni! Thank you Joseph :) xomo!

Mahtab Bangalee

January 20, 2019 at 9:31 PM

exactly written

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 21, 2019 at 8:39 AM

Thank you Mahtab :) xomo

M. L. Kiser

December 28, 2018 at 3:41 PM

And there are so many hidden there...well penned.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 29, 2018 at 8:06 AM

Thank you :) xomo

Heidi Sands

December 28, 2018 at 12:35 PM

Awesome poem! and ugh, those secrets behind the smiles! Well done! :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 29, 2018 at 8:05 AM

;) Thank you Heidi! xomo

Kim Rodrigues

December 28, 2018 at 6:04 AM

Says much in a few lines! Reminds me of the show “Dark Shadows”

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 28, 2018 at 8:00 AM

Ooh! I'll have to look that up ;) xomo!

Arthur Vaso

December 28, 2018 at 12:49 AM

I cant help thinking you just wrote Trumps wedding vows, for all marriages!! LOL

Eve Roper

December 28, 2018 at 9:03 AM

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 28, 2018 at 7:59 AM

BA HA HA

Carolyn Devonshire

December 27, 2018 at 1:11 PM

There is much wisdom in your words and many couples do seem to keep things from each other. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 28, 2018 at 7:59 AM

All relationships have their blind spots, mothers daughters... ;) thank you Carolyn! xomo

Eve Roper

December 27, 2018 at 11:54 AM

Couples will keep secrets and still stay together, Maureen,good luck in the contest. Happy New Year! Hugs Eve~`*

Eve Roper

December 28, 2018 at 9:08 AM

I read your contest instructions. I will try writing something if I'm not to late , but brain injury isn't funny.. I almost lost my son while in the service from a car accident and Traumatic brain injury and I from a tumor removal of the brain.. It leaves a lot of side effects and not for the best.. I am so sorry you have had to go through this. I am very lucky I didn't get the headaches like so many.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 28, 2018 at 7:53 AM

From each other, from themselves. All the best in the New Year lovely <3 xomo!