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The new year now is creeping into view with resolutions, hopes and dreams galore, so this year what I thought that I would do is get off on the right foot weeks before. I've upped the rate I pace at when I walk to burn off calories and trim my waist, and breakfast times now need no knife and fork, it's Muesli , hope I get used to the taste. Brown bread instead of white, meats are lean cuts, tins of mackerel ,more omega threes, for extra protein there's unsalted nuts and tons of fruit to help stave off disease. It's great to know that as the years go by I will be really healthy when I die.

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Date: 12/8/2017 4:40:00 PM
i love muesli; rixh in fiber... well done, viv, your word choices make this piece a really good one to read!.. huggs
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Viv Wigley
Date: 12/14/2017 1:04:00 AM
thanks, nette, hope you're well x
Date: 12/5/2017 10:30:00 AM
Oh so clever, those last two lines says volumes, great sonnet Viv.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 12/14/2017 1:05:00 AM
Thanks, harry, glad you like it. Regards, Viv
Date: 12/5/2017 8:47:00 AM
... or it may help you grow much older in good health :) I enjoyed your poem, Viv. If this is autobiographical: good luck keeping up with your new goals.
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Date: 12/5/2017 2:20:00 AM
ha ha ha this made me smile as I can relate as i do most of these things lol - oh that final line is absolutely hilarious:-) hugs Jan xx
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