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It was day one in August- I turned eight years old and visiting my grandparents awhile. I called them Nonna and Nonno; with them, I loved to stay. My Nonna had just finished braiding my long hair; again I said, "these braids- I truly hate!" As we so often did, Nonno and I head straight to take a walk and breathe in the fresh air at a small park across the way. But, there, we did not go. I looked at him and he looked back with a big smile. Into his old-time barbershop, we strolled. Needless to say, excitement filled me uncontrolled! My hair was soon to be a brand new style! Like magic, braids fell down below- new me- my eighth birthday! At first, my Mom beheld me with an angry stare- but, then was thankful- I indeed looked great! December 27, 2020 Contest: A Little Memory - My Invented Form Sponsor: Constance La France
Rhyme Pattern ABCDEF FEDCBA ABCDEF Syllables Per Verse: 12/10/8/6/12/10

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Date: 1/21/2021 4:40:00 AM
Unusual happening on a birthday. I can remember hating the long hair and how I enjoyed having it cut off. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Date: 1/19/2021 12:08:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest, A Little Memory using my invented Rhyme form, wonderful poem, I like it a lot _Constance
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Date: 12/28/2020 4:33:00 AM
A cute memory to cherish, Sandra... You narrated so beautifully... I loved it...
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