Best

The fish that flees away
breaking the hook
seems to be the best;
likewise, the lips of you, o girl,
you have not given me to kiss,
seem to be the best.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 8, 2013 at 4:04 PM
the one that got away? good write Sayeed, enjoyed ~ always, Linda
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June 9, 2013 at 1:23 AM
thanks, dear Linda
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