Best

I lie awake here,
Thinking of past wrongdoings,
And wish I had known.
Knew that you would deserve more,
That I'd be the best, for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 4:33 AM
Well expressed thoughts, Hunter.
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August 13, 2010 at 10:44 PM
SUcH a SwEeT wRiTe, enjOyEd. *LUV -S.K.A.T.
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August 13, 2010 at 10:31 PM
So enjoyed your creative write tonight Hunter .. a powerful Tanka .. luv..
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