Beside Me

just lay here beside me
where the lillies talk to the orange sky
and the evening wind titters all around the place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Harper Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 12:38 PM
i'm feelin' it KK nice write
Guzzi Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 5:09 PM
k k...sweet verse full of longing. On my verse Entwine me. You said Are you serious?hmmmmm...The You I spoke of was capitalized because I was alluding to God ;)..and Yes I was seriuos! Light & Love always and please enter my "Dialect Contest" if you haven't already!
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 4:31 AM
Nicley written poetry. Very descriptive. Keep writing. Sara
Guzzi Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 10:45 AM
awwwwwwww what a man! I've missed your love verses!!! Light & Love PS I expect a dialect poem out of you! Showing us what the language of your land sounds like?
Strand Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 8:11 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments today KK,Rgds Brian
Chircop Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 4:34 AM
This goes to my favs my friend,it is so beautiful--charma
Freeman Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 11:22 AM
beautiful thought. Moses
Devonshire Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 3:12 PM
What a lovely image you have created with your colorful words, k.k. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 9:59 AM
stronger verse without the last 4 words ;) I know you didn't like my Gramp no wonder please read Idella....his wife :). You have mail.
Chircop Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Hello,few words from your heart and soul-beautiful painting you ve created--charma
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