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Beryl’s Assorted Biscuits, A care home tale

Humming as she arranges an assortment of biscuits 
On pastel green plates, 
(Viennese waltz) 

Beryl checks the clock ticking softly, three thirty,
“Come along, Shannon”, 
Her young charge steps in alongside her 
As Beryl works the care home rooms.
Teas and coffees, counterclockwise,
In the waltz of the afternoon tea trolley. 

Beryl choreographs and guides as they go,
“Now, remember Reenie is partial 
to the vintage charm of a custard cream,
Whereas Doris will go for a fig roll – 
Sturdy with a hidden sweetness, 
That surprises,
And Edie will tell you her stories twice - 
Will want for the Twix.” 

Shannon pours teas into proper cups with proper saucers 
As they glide over to Ballroom Blanche,
“Danced through life haven't you, love”, 
Beryl adds in whisper, 
“Blanche can seem a bit crisp around the edges,
But she's really quite a softee – sweet,
She leans to Viennese whirl”.

Shannon adds two sugars,
Twirls the spoon in the cup 
As she hands silent Marjorie 
in her beige cardy, 
A malted milk.

They reverse turn to the sun filled lounge.
Jammy dodgers with heart-shaped windows 
Are shared by Norma and Dierdre 
Receiving bouquets of babbies in bonnets,
Children gathered 
to see their great nannies.

And by the window looking out, 
Connie, 
For whom standards never slip,
In wig, pearls, red lip, 
Takes the Florentine of glamour.

Young Shannon turns in awe to Beryl asking,
“How do you remember who has what?” 
Beryl smiles, and with mock curtsy, 
She blushes
“What am I to say?      
It's like I have a gift.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Meadows Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 5:49 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Cunningham Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 12:37 AM
You pictured the scene so well Rachel, afternoon tea at the care home. Brought back memories of when my mom was in one. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Treacher Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for connecting with this poem. I'm in awe of those who do caring roles.
Faure Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 2:13 PM
Enjoyed very much!
Treacher Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 2:32 PM
So pleased you found and enjoyed. Thank you
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