Ann Peck Poet Haiku

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Berry Merry Christmas

Red holly berries
    bring joy to snow-covered smiles
         hearts warm in love's glow
         
November 15,2021
Fall or Winter Holiday Haiku Poetry Contest
by Tania Kitchin
PS syllable checker, 11/15/2021

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Brian Sambourne December 23, 2021 at 10:39 AM Very nicely penned. A fine read for this December day. Cheers Brian

Kim Rodrigues November 23, 2021 at 10:35 AM Your first line brings joy :)

Janice Canerdy November 22, 2021 at 4:55 PM Excellent haiku, Ann. Janice

Vijay Pandit November 21, 2021 at 1:54 PM Beautiful ode to the season, Ann. Enjoyed the festive voice of your poem.

Harry Horsman November 20, 2021 at 9:04 PM A scene i've often seen when growing up in the Yorkshire dales, your last line says it all for me, Ann, love it.

Regina Mcintosh November 19, 2021 at 12:55 PM Lovely writing. Hope you're a winner. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 3:04 PM charming poem, I love the title too:-) hugs Jan xx Ann Peck November 19, 2021 at 10:44 AM Thanks, Jan :) Have a lovely Thanksgiving.

Anne E Sangster - K November 16, 2021 at 8:26 PM That's lovely Ann! Very cheery and Chistmasy. Red Holly berries are so pretty. Good luck in the competition my friend :-) Ann Peck November 17, 2021 at 8:27 AM Hi Anne! I wonder: can people eat holly berries? Birds, maybe. I know pyracantha berries make birds drunk. Well, not a big problem in today's world :) Have a nice Thanksgiving.

Michelle Faulkner November 16, 2021 at 8:16 PM Love the imagery of the red berries and the white warmth of 'snow covered smiles' - hope it's a winner for you~ Ann Peck November 17, 2021 at 8:20 AM Thanks, Michelle! I've gone back and forth with the title. Don't want to insult anyone who may pronounce B for V. Don't know why I keep borrowing trouble :)

Andrea Dietrich November 16, 2021 at 3:15 PM So delightful!! Ann Peck November 17, 2021 at 1:32 PM Thank you so much, Andrea.

Rico Leffanta November 16, 2021 at 10:47 AM Enjoyed! Good luck! (The Captcha Code is V8J? V-8 Juice?) Ann Peck November 16, 2021 at 2:45 PM Could be. Might mix well with holly berries :) Thanks for commenting, Rico.