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Red holly berries bring joy to snow-covered smiles hearts warm in love's glow November 15,2021 Fall or Winter Holiday Haiku Poetry Contest by Tania Kitchin PS syllable checker, 11/15/2021

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Date: 12/23/2021 10:39:00 AM
Very nicely penned. A fine read for this December day. Cheers Brian
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Date: 11/23/2021 10:35:00 AM
Your first line brings joy :)
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Date: 11/22/2021 4:55:00 PM
Excellent haiku, Ann. Janice
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Date: 11/21/2021 1:54:00 PM
Beautiful ode to the season, Ann. Enjoyed the festive voice of your poem.
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Date: 11/20/2021 9:04:00 PM
A scene i've often seen when growing up in the Yorkshire dales, your last line says it all for me, Ann, love it.
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Date: 11/19/2021 12:55:00 PM
Lovely writing. Hope you're a winner. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 11/18/2021 3:04:00 PM
charming poem, I love the title too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/19/2021 10:44:00 AM
Thanks, Jan :) Have a lovely Thanksgiving.
Date: 11/16/2021 8:26:00 PM
That's lovely Ann! Very cheery and Chistmasy. Red Holly berries are so pretty. Good luck in the competition my friend :-)
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/17/2021 8:27:00 AM
Hi Anne! I wonder: can people eat holly berries? Birds, maybe. I know pyracantha berries make birds drunk. Well, not a big problem in today's world :) Have a nice Thanksgiving.
Date: 11/16/2021 8:16:00 PM
Love the imagery of the red berries and the white warmth of 'snow covered smiles' - hope it's a winner for you~
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/17/2021 8:20:00 AM
Thanks, Michelle! I've gone back and forth with the title. Don't want to insult anyone who may pronounce B for V. Don't know why I keep borrowing trouble :)
Date: 11/16/2021 3:15:00 PM
So delightful!!
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/17/2021 1:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Date: 11/16/2021 10:47:00 AM
Enjoyed! Good luck! (The Captcha Code is V8J? V-8 Juice?)
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/16/2021 2:45:00 PM
Could be. Might mix well with holly berries :) Thanks for commenting, Rico.