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Bermudian Shoreline

Strolling 'long Bermuda's shoreline,
Waves caressing our toes.
Whence they come and whither they go,
No mortal really knows!

We stroll 'neath the moon's mellow glow,
To a secluded cove.
Though age hath taken its toll, we,
Relive our youthful love!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
(c) 29 March 2015 All Rights Reserved

Entry for nette onclaud's "Let Me Feel Your Lines" Contest

No. 2 - Shoreline

Copyright © Robert L. Hinshaw | Year Posted 2015

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/16/2015 12:07:00 AM this is really nice. The shoreline captured most of us in this contest. BIG congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/16/2015 11:48:00 AM Thanks Andrea. I have many fond memories of Bermuda since that was my first overseas assignment in the AF and where I met my future wife, Vera. Bob H

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/15/2015 12:41:00 PM Ahh!!! Congrats on this very romantic winner!!Sara Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/15/2015 12:32:00 PM Hi Bob! So pleased to be back with congratulations! Hope you're keeping well. // paul Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 5/15/2015 4:23:00 AM Wow. Romance is not only for the young! Congratulations, Robert. Kim Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 5/14/2015 9:08:00 PM How are you Mr Bob? I guess I missed this before. A lovely piece about your youth and love. Congrats. Hope all is well. BG Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/14/2015 7:40:00 PM Bob H.:-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/14/2015 5:55:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Robert:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/14/2015 7:09:00 PM Thank you Jan. Bermuda is where I met my wife and we have many fond memories of our time there while I was in the Air Force. Bob h

Skat A Date: 5/14/2015 5:20:00 PM Bob H, congratulations on your win. SKAT Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/14/2015 7:07:00 PM Thank you, Skat - your comments and encouragement mean a lot to me - Bob h

Paul Callus Date: 4/1/2015 2:41:00 PM I see that we both have gone for the 'shoreline' theme, Robert. I like your take...nothing more lovely than being able to relive youthful love! #7 // paul Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 3/30/2015 6:43:00 PM G'day Robert... poems written about water tend to have a calming effect and this poem of yours gives me that feeling. Lindsay Login to Reply

Anna Hopper Date: 3/30/2015 7:51:00 AM This is why I love poetry! Simply poetic! Elegant write! Login to Reply

Emile Pinet Date: 3/29/2015 7:11:00 PM This poetic trip though the heart is, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. Emile. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 3/29/2015 2:52:00 PM wonderful imagery - a lovely romantic write - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 3/29/2015 2:55:00 PM Thank you very much, dear Jan. As you have seen from many of my past writes, I don't usually write "mush" but deemed it OK for nette's contest. Hope you have a grand week ahead filled with inspiration for more of your splendid poetry - bob h