Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Rhyme

Bermudian Shoreline

Strolling 'long Bermuda's shoreline,
Waves caressing our toes.
Whence they come and whither they go,
No mortal really knows!

We stroll 'neath the moon's mellow glow,
To a secluded cove.
Though age hath taken its toll, we,
Relive our youthful love!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
(c) 29 March 2015 All Rights Reserved

Entry for nette onclaud's "Let Me Feel Your Lines" Contest

No. 2 - Shoreline

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Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2015 at 12:07 AM this is really nice. The shoreline captured most of us in this contest. BIG congrats on your well deserved win. Robert L. Hinshaw May 16, 2015 at 11:48 AM Thanks Andrea. I have many fond memories of Bermuda since that was my first overseas assignment in the AF and where I met my future wife, Vera. Bob H

Sara Kendrick May 15, 2015 at 12:41 PM Ahh!!! Congrats on this very romantic winner!!Sara

Paul Callus May 15, 2015 at 12:32 PM Hi Bob! So pleased to be back with congratulations! Hope you're keeping well. // paul

Kp Nunez May 15, 2015 at 4:23 AM Wow. Romance is not only for the young! Congratulations, Robert. Kim

Barbara Gorelick May 14, 2015 at 9:08 PM How are you Mr Bob? I guess I missed this before. A lovely piece about your youth and love. Congrats. Hope all is well. BG

Poet Destroyer A May 14, 2015 at 7:40 PM Bob H.:-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~

Jan Allison May 14, 2015 at 5:55 PM Dropping back with my congrats Robert:-) hugs Jan xx Robert L. Hinshaw May 14, 2015 at 7:09 PM Thank you Jan. Bermuda is where I met my wife and we have many fond memories of our time there while I was in the Air Force. Bob h

Skat A May 14, 2015 at 5:20 PM Bob H, congratulations on your win. SKAT Robert L. Hinshaw May 14, 2015 at 7:07 PM Thank you, Skat - your comments and encouragement mean a lot to me - Bob h

Paul Callus April 1, 2015 at 2:41 PM I see that we both have gone for the 'shoreline' theme, Robert. I like your take...nothing more lovely than being able to relive youthful love! #7 // paul

Lindsay Laurie March 30, 2015 at 6:43 PM G'day Robert... poems written about water tend to have a calming effect and this poem of yours gives me that feeling. Lindsay

Anna Hopper March 30, 2015 at 7:51 AM This is why I love poetry! Simply poetic! Elegant write!

Emile Pinet March 29, 2015 at 7:11 PM This poetic trip though the heart is, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. Emile.

Jan Allison March 29, 2015 at 2:52 PM wonderful imagery - a lovely romantic write - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Robert L. Hinshaw March 29, 2015 at 2:55 PM Thank you very much, dear Jan. As you have seen from many of my past writes, I don't usually write "mush" but deemed it OK for nette's contest. Hope you have a grand week ahead filled with inspiration for more of your splendid poetry - bob h