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Bermudian Shoreline

Strolling 'long Bermuda's shoreline, Waves caressing our toes. Whence they come and whither they go, No mortal really knows! We stroll 'neath the moon's mellow glow, To a secluded cove. Though age hath taken its toll, we, Relive our youthful love! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (c) 29 March 2015 All Rights Reserved Entry for nette onclaud's "Let Me Feel Your Lines" Contest No. 2 - Shoreline

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2015 12:07:00 AM

this is really nice. The shoreline captured most of us in this contest. BIG congrats on your well deserved win.

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 5/16/2015 11:48:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. I have many fond memories of Bermuda since that was my first overseas assignment in the AF and where I met my future wife, Vera. Bob H

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2015 12:41:00 PM

Ahh!!! Congrats on this very romantic winner!!Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2015 12:32:00 PM

Hi Bob! So pleased to be back with congratulations! Hope you're keeping well. // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/15/2015 4:23:00 AM

Wow. Romance is not only for the young! Congratulations, Robert. Kim

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/14/2015 9:08:00 PM

How are you Mr Bob? I guess I missed this before. A lovely piece about your youth and love. Congrats. Hope all is well. BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2015 7:40:00 PM

Bob H.:-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2015 5:55:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Robert:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 5/14/2015 7:09:00 PM

Thank you Jan. Bermuda is where I met my wife and we have many fond memories of our time there while I was in the Air Force. Bob h

Skat A

Date: 5/14/2015 5:20:00 PM

Bob H, congratulations on your win. SKAT

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 5/14/2015 7:07:00 PM

Thank you, Skat - your comments and encouragement mean a lot to me - Bob h

Paul Callus

Date: 4/1/2015 2:41:00 PM

I see that we both have gone for the 'shoreline' theme, Robert. I like your take...nothing more lovely than being able to relive youthful love! #7 // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/30/2015 6:43:00 PM

G'day Robert... poems written about water tend to have a calming effect and this poem of yours gives me that feeling. Lindsay

Anna Hopper

Date: 3/30/2015 7:51:00 AM

This is why I love poetry! Simply poetic! Elegant write!

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/29/2015 7:11:00 PM

This poetic trip though the heart is, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/29/2015 2:52:00 PM

wonderful imagery - a lovely romantic write - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 3/29/2015 2:55:00 PM

Thank you very much, dear Jan. As you have seen from many of my past writes, I don't usually write "mush" but deemed it OK for nette's contest. Hope you have a grand week ahead filled with inspiration for more of your splendid poetry - bob h