Bereaved

Each year on December the first,
I remember for twelve years ago,
my mother, my wonderful mother
gave our family a terrible blow.
She passed away quietly at home,
and I made this solemn decree,
Each year on December the first,
I’d take flowers to the cemetery.

This year while at her graveside,
in midst of my own silent prayer,
I heard a wail in the distance,
and saw a man kneeling where
he held his hands to the heavens,
while he looked up into the sky,
and shouted out time after time,
“Tell me why did you have to die!”

It was obvious he was in need,
of comforting with his ordeal,
for I had not witnessed before,
the way this man seemed to feel.
So quietly I walked to his side, 
where still he looked up to the sky,
and shouted out time after time,
“Tell me why did you have to die!”

On his shoulder I placed my hand,
while he cried that comment again,
I thought maybe talking might help,
to ease him through part of his pain.
I said to him “Was it your child?”
Still crying “No” he shook his head,
so I asked then “Was it your parent?”
“No, my wife’s first husband!” he said.
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Date: 7/9/2021 12:17:00 PM
I had a good laugh with your write Lindsay, I found it hilarious actually - poor guy and now he has landed with first prize! Glad you enjoyed my Kruger park poem, it is enthralling. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/9/2021 11:04:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... I'm pleased you had a giggle with this verse. There is an open range zoo at Werribee housing mainly African animals and is very popular. There are national parks here, but the majority animals are kangaroos plus emus. Apart from birds, most animals are nocturnal and are not grazers - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 6/28/2021 12:04:00 PM
Oh this one s a prize. Loved the surprise ending. Too, too funny. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/30/2021 9:04:00 PM
Hello Judy ... I guess it does have a funny finish, and I'm pleased you got a giggle out of it - thanks again Judy - Lindsay
Date: 6/27/2021 1:22:00 PM
oh that is such a great ending. Why don't you enter the surprise ending contest? you have hundreds of poems to choose from.
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Date: 6/30/2021 9:02:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... thank you Andrea. Not very interested in contests. I prefer readers to be my judges, and I've always been like this - thanks all the same Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 6/25/2021 6:05:00 PM
Lol the master of the punchline is bang on target. Tom
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Date: 6/30/2021 8:59:00 PM
Hello Tom ... pleased that you got a cackle out of this one Tom. Wonder how many times it happy - thanks Tom - Lindsay
Date: 6/25/2021 9:59:00 AM
LOL! This is VERY well told, Lindsay!
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Date: 6/30/2021 8:55:00 PM
Hello Janice ... pleased you got a giggle out of this blokes predicament - thanks again Janice - Lindsay
Date: 6/23/2021 2:33:00 PM
ha ha ha dark humour at its best lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2021 8:53:00 PM
Hello Jan ... it appears that someone believes that they made a poor decision - thanks Jan - Lindsay
Date: 6/22/2021 9:14:00 PM
What an ending. Totally unexpected, made me laugh too. This is a good entry for surprise me contest. Have a wonderful day ahead friend.
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Date: 6/30/2021 8:51:00 PM
Hello Rama ... this verse was meant to have you laughing and by your fine comment it appears it worked - thanks Rama - Lindsay
Date: 6/22/2021 7:35:00 PM
You did it again! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/30/2021 8:49:00 PM
Hello Rico ... I hoped you might enjoy this latest silliness Rico - Lindsay
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