Bentley and Shadow

My friend had a beautiful bird and Bentley was his name
He was a little cockatiel and he liked to play a game

Where he'd undo a charm bracelet,throw it all around
He'd say his name so loudly then he'd make a giggling sound

She got another cockatiel,a smaller one than Bentley
"Pretty boy Bentley"he'd yell out and look at you intently

She had to name him Shadow for he was a bit confused
He mixed up his identity,his own name he refused

I never was a bird person but these two were such fun!
They'd sometimes fly around the house and have us on the run

Chatterboxes both of them they had alot to say
Like"howdy,whatcha doin',good morning" and "no way"

I tried to teach them my name but they would have none of it
They would say"hey good lookin" so I learned to rise above it!




By Deb Wilson
**for Beautiful Birds Mini Blog Contest
sponsored by Constance~A Rambling Poet~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 12:49 PM
Constance, wit is a rare gem because you have all of it. Nice write, I love it.
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Constance's mini blog contest "Beautiful Bird". Thank you for your kind comments always. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 11:01 PM
Hey this is quite charming, And I just found aother fav poet here at Soup! Luv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 10:35 PM
These talking birds are charming. My mom had a myhna bird that imitated sounds as well as words. She used to fool the dog by imitating his squeak toy. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations on 7th place in Beautiful Birds Mini Blog Contest, this poem was so much fun to read ~~
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September 18, 2010 at 3:31 PM
Enjoyed reading your work this evening..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..That reads like a very cool pair of birds..I was delighted that you stopped by and commented on my work..Sara
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