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November- 3-2025
Benign Bliss Burn Poetry Contest
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Benign Bliss Burn
“In-form polarities merge in the heart
One that became two becomes one again
Breath by breath feeling bliss ignition start
God’s grace in-pours as we dance in the rain”
Though we were separate entities once,
With opposing tastes and inclinations
We are now the yin and yang, a wholesome pair
Where polarities meet and merge
As light and dark in perfect harmony blend.
Once our senses were like fluff
They floated and wandered without will
The sky was not enough for us
And we saw the horizon constricted.
Alas! Our ego bloated and our cravings
Egged us on to indulge in self- love.
We vied to become first,
To reach infinitesimal heights,
And our interests clashed, resenting each other’s thirst.
But now we feel the intense energy flow of love,
Gifted by God as a special boon to man.
We feel, we are eternally linked in a loop.
We are now connected by the strings of love
In a zone of perennial bliss,
Where time, space and existence get frozen
With mind, soul and self, synchronized.
Our life has the resplendence of a rainbow.
Now we know each other inside out
And trust fully without a shadow of doubt.
As darkness gives way to light,
Cleansed away from the debris of the night,
Our lives now shine as the rays of the sun dipped in gold.
Breath by breath, droplets of bliss pour in,
And we dance in the rain of God’s grace.
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