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November- 3-2025

Benign Bliss Burn Poetry Contest

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Benign Bliss Burn

“In-form polarities merge in the heart
One that became two becomes one again
Breath by breath feeling bliss ignition start
God’s grace in-pours as we dance in the rain” 


Though we were separate entities once, With opposing tastes and inclinations We are now the yin and yang, a wholesome pair Where polarities meet and merge As light and dark in perfect harmony blend. Once our senses were like fluff They floated and wandered without will The sky was not enough for us And we saw the horizon constricted. Alas! Our ego bloated and our cravings Egged us on to indulge in self- love. We vied to become first, To reach infinitesimal heights, And our interests clashed, resenting each other’s thirst. But now we feel the intense energy flow of love, Gifted by God as a special boon to man. We feel, we are eternally linked in a loop. We are now connected by the strings of love In a zone of perennial bliss, Where time, space and existence get frozen With mind, soul and self, synchronized. Our life has the resplendence of a rainbow. Now we know each other inside out And trust fully without a shadow of doubt. As darkness gives way to light, Cleansed away from the debris of the night, Our lives now shine as the rays of the sun dipped in gold. Breath by breath, droplets of bliss pour in, And we dance in the rain of God’s grace.
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Guptar Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations, Valsa, on your win in this contest with a shining depiction of love, emanating from the depth of your heart and soul, with two separate entities harmoniously blending to become one. Wishing you a shining day.
Rose  Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 4:23 AM
Our lives now shine as the rays of the sun dipped in gold. I can see your bright light from these golden words of yours, a worthy win dear Valsa, congrats on your beautiful expression of love here,
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November 18, 2025 at 1:27 AM
Your poem serves as a praiseworthy,  glowing endorsement, Valsa, wonderful! Exceedingly elegant at every point. A clear and concise representation of the inquiry. Well-deserved win,  Congratulations.
Alex Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 9:54 PM
"Cleansed away from the debris of the night, Our lives now shine as the rays of the sun dipped in gold." - Higly poetic verses. Beautifully written. Congratiulations!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 6:27 PM
outstanding! absoluting graceful at every turn....liked "we dance in the rain of God's grace.' Best wishes with this contest entry, hugs, SAra
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