Written Nov 2, 2025 for contest sponsor Unseeking Seeker
Line of inquiry: “In-form polarities merge in the heart One that became two becomes one again Breath by breath feeling bliss ignition start God’s grace in-pours as we dance in the rain” Finally God has answered passionate prayers Was alone until I met you in my heart on a dare As two souls in the beginning emerald excited We became one, merged so denim delighted Rain like melodies fall as if to bless baptize I feel as if I’m from a rib in your side Breath by breath we have taken sacred step Engaged to marry with our Father’s help Ignition silver starts in our synchronized heart Making a commitment in the light despite dark
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