Sixty-three years married, now widowed..Where do I differentiate from here.
"In-form polarities merge in the heart One that became two becomes one again Breath by breath feeling bliss ignition start God’s grace in-pours as we dance in the rain” One Meets one Three emerge Three lives joined but Separate in ways One emerges to meet one One meets him and finds she's loved Yet, those two lives encompass more All the ancestors that were before Does the weight of them bare down heavily?
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Sixty-three years married, now widowed..Where do I differentiate from here.