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Line of Inquiry => “In-form polarities merge in the heart
One that became two becomes one again
Breath by breath feeling bliss ignition start
God’s grace in-pours as we dance in the rain”

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Benign bliss burn

Heaven leans earthward
to heart's open doorway
yin and yang entwine
from one, two were born—
in love's clasp they merge again

Breath builds the arch bridge
spirit rises, grace descends
phases kept waiting—
each breath in opens the mind
for the spirit to enter

Rain falls unbidden
as grace drops upon tilled soil
in homecoming joy
with the bliss of two, now one
rejoining with grace a pace!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rose  Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 4:22 AM
Heaven leans earthward, and Oh what a blessing it is when it does dear poet, your poetry is beautiful, Congrats
Alex Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 9:52 PM
With many images and effects of the heart, the poem is very powerful. Congratulations!
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