Line of Inquiry => “In-form polarities merge in the heart One that became two becomes one again Breath by breath feeling bliss ignition start God’s grace in-pours as we dance in the rain”
Heaven leans earthward to heart's open doorway yin and yang entwine from one, two were born— in love's clasp they merge again Breath builds the arch bridge spirit rises, grace descends phases kept waiting— each breath in opens the mind for the spirit to enter Rain falls unbidden as grace drops upon tilled soil in homecoming joy with the bliss of two, now one rejoining with grace a pace!
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