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Beneath the Willow Tree

Down by the river a willow tree grows; osiers sway gently as autumn breeze blows; under its branches in peaceful repose, lying on blanket with my sweetest Rose. Watching the Martins soar high in the sky; puffy white clouds that are drifting on by; living the easy life nothing awry, passing the day on a natural high. Afternoon breeze gently blows through her hair; green are her eyes and her cheeks soft and fair. Whispers of love with each other we share; tempting our passions this autumn affair. Kisses that graciously dance ‘cross her lips; pondering passions as our hearts eclipse. Hands reaching gently encircle my hips; pulling me closer, we’re losing our grips. Hearts beating quickly too rapid to speak; coming together as our passions peak; lying on blanket so spent and so weak ‘neath the old willow tree down by the creek.
September 8, 2018

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Date: 9/19/2023 7:13:00 PM
I had to read your weeping willow poem after your recent comment, John. This is stellar writing and ultra romantic..loved it! :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/20/2023 2:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura, I’m glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 9/18/2018 1:34:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/18/2018 1:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line, I appreciate it. John
Date: 9/13/2018 9:50:00 AM
Beautifully expressed and a wonderful rhyme, John
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/13/2018 11:03:00 AM
Thank you, Warren, I appreciate it. John
Date: 9/9/2018 5:22:00 PM
Hello John Gondolf, i will say that you have painted a beautiful scene with your words. As i read this poem I felt I was sitting beneath the willow tree. Have a nice evening my friend.
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/9/2018 5:39:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene, I appreciate it. John
Date: 9/8/2018 6:12:00 PM
"lying on blanket with my sweetest Rose" There is something beautiful about this thought. Being called a flower- of any kind. It is sooooo romantic. Makes me melt. Your entire poem is breathtaking. Passionate. Love is in bloom. :) And your poem is simply lovely. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/8/2018 7:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Brandy, I glad you enjoyed my little poem of nature and love. I appreciate you and your wonderful comments and the support you always show me. All the best to you. John
Date: 9/8/2018 10:49:00 AM
Oh, how gloriously rhythmic and sensual your poem is, John. A dreamy delight of romance, gorgeous imagery and splendid rhymes. My heart fills with the loving spirit and joy of your beautiful piece. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/8/2018 4:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Susan, your thoughts mean a great deal to me. I’m so glad you enjoyed my poem. All the best. John

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