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Beneath the Strawberry Moon

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September 17, 2023; Placed 1st: Any topic Any Form; Sponsor: Sotto Poet

Hoisting passions fervid, probing celestial height, Hypnotized we stood, enthralled in smile of June, Caressing dreams flirtatious of a romantic night, Reaffirming love, beneath the strawberry moon. Pulsing beats heavenly, fantasies esoteric chased, Thrilling realm of love, resonating deep in your heart, Content in your embrace, as memories intimate traced, Echoes of promises eternal, forever vows impart. Seeing you rejoiced, snuggled in my loving arms, Nary a cloud dared to encumber cerulean skies, As you navigated sight through opaline sea of stars Tantalizing flame of passion, sparkling doting eyes, Having been wooed by mystical glimpse of Luna, Proffering blush of aura, tantalizing romance, Bedecking tints orange upon luminous rosy awe Seducing stance-entranced of enamored glance, Gazing with throbbing hearts, where desires croon, Hypnotized we stood, enthralled in smile of June, Humming melodies, in sync with the celestial tune, Reaffirming love, beneath the strawberry moon.

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/1/2023 9:46:00 AM

Great entry for the contest, Vijay. A comforting poem of Love and romance in nature's natural setting. Thanks for sharing your eloquent poetry with us, my dear friend. Bill

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/23/2023 10:42:00 AM

my goodness Vijay this poem is enchanting, exceptional and an absolute pleasure to read, really breath taking. All your romantic poems are expressed and created with a poignancy that only a talented poet such as you writes, but this one, to express it in basic terminology ' takes the cake' - passionate lovers 'Beneath the Strawberry Moon'. Awesome poem! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/23/2023 6:34:00 AM

Such amazing imagery my good friend. A true pleasure to read this romantic new creation! May the strawberry moon serve young lovers. Another fav for my growing list God bless you.

Joseph May

Date: 9/22/2023 12:21:00 PM

A strawberry moon igniting the flames of romance, Wonderful write Vijay

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/21/2023 6:06:00 PM

Dear Vijay, your exceptional piece on a great subject was truly enlightening. The vivid imagery, skillful employment of metaphors, and compelling arguments showcased in your writing are truly magnificent. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

The Situation

Date: 9/21/2023 3:46:00 PM

Love being chased through June.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/20/2023 6:21:00 AM

Great rhymes, great theme. Who wouldn't want to chill with a loved one under a strawberry moon? So romantic

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/20/2023 5:31:00 AM

Your romantic lines always prove to be lush and rich in their fullness of imagery! What a lovely title as well to set the tone for a wonderful read Vijay! You are a romantic master! Happy Wednesday!!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/19/2023 1:28:00 PM

Strawberry Moon is the perfect image for a romantic night gazing at the moon together. I liked the phrase "smile of June.' I found your poem just perfect. Thanks for sharing it.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/19/2023 10:19:00 AM

This is beautiful Vijay. I love that 3rd stanza and the second line of it too. This makes me want to go moon gazing! Perfect ending too. Well done :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:53:00 AM

Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, as always, Heidi.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2023 8:44:00 AM

Thrilling is the keyword of this poem. Best use of idioms and imagery. And romantic to boot. Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:52:00 AM

Much appreciate, Victor--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/19/2023 6:13:00 AM

This should do well, Vijay, simply blew my mind away, awe-inspiring -"opaline sea of stars":)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:52:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Many thanks, Jo.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/19/2023 2:29:00 AM

Ah strawberry moon! How beautiful is this, so heartfelt and romantic and your choice of words here is just beyond captivating and impressive as always. So descriptive and touching. Those opaline sea of stars to echoes of promises, they all seem so passionate woven to their highlight and elaborate the depth of emotions . I admire ur rhymes, and imagery. Brilliant. A fave for me again

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:51:00 AM

Your generous remarks are much appreciated and valued, Ink--and your FAVE is fondly treasured. Many thanks for your kind remarks and your FAVE.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/18/2023 7:56:00 PM

Romance is enhanced, through magical moments of woo, which create a beautiful tune- under the strawberry moon. Your thoughts are so mesmerizing and dreamy, they also hold a hint of passion. Simply breathtaking, Vijay. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:49:00 AM

So glad you liked the poem, my dear friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always, Brandy. Always a delight when you visit. Many thanks. Hugs to you as well.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/18/2023 12:13:00 PM

Every line of this elegant poem captivates and delights, Vijay. I love the title and the ending was very pleasing. Good luck in the contest. This is a fave. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:48:00 AM

Glad to hear that. Many thanks my friend, for your kind remarks and your FAVE. Much appreciate, as always, Evelyn.

Jay Narain

Date: 9/18/2023 11:19:00 AM

Awesome, beautiful poem.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:47:00 AM

Thank you, Jay--much appreciate.

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/18/2023 10:26:00 AM

This is such a beautiful, romantic poem dear Vijay. Beautifully penned as always. I love the title as well - gorgeous! Incredibly well written with so many poetic lines full of divine imagery’ Nary a cloud dared to encumber cerulean skies’,’ Gazing with throbbing hearts, where desires croon’. Delightful! Thank you so much for an inspiring write and good luck in the context. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:47:00 AM

You are so very kind, Christina. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Maria Williams

Date: 9/18/2023 5:29:00 AM

Wow how coincidental that we should both be writing about the Moon. Yours is simply divine, Vijay. Mystical and enchanting poetry, flawless as always Love and Hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:46:00 AM

Yes--that was indeed surprising. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Maria. Glad to see you again. Many thanks.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/17/2023 2:48:00 PM

Another wonderful write Vijay a sure winner in my estimation!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:45:00 AM

Glad to see you again, John. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/17/2023 1:17:00 PM

- A heavenly melody, Vijay .... beautiful : "Nary a cloud dared to encumber cerulean skies" :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:44:00 AM

So very kind of you, Anne-Lise. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/17/2023 1:02:00 PM

what a wonderful title beneath the strawberry moon. Your poetry is full of flavor Vijay, delectable, !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:44:00 AM

Thank you Vienna--much appreciate, Always a joy when you visit.

Deb M

Date: 9/17/2023 12:42:00 PM

Awww so very beautiful Vijay! Debx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:43:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Deb.

Silent One

Date: 9/17/2023 11:03:00 AM

Another enchanting love poem from your pen with so much romantic musings.. the imagery is lovely with words like strawberry moon and tantalizing flame of passion... I think this one will do well in Sotto's contest...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2023 10:42:00 AM

Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, SO.