Beneath the Rainbow

i walk in partial shade ~ either side the sky falls in semi cascade


Beneath the Rainbow Poetry Contest
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Howmanysyllables (17)
03/02/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Like standing in the eye of the hurricane. I was in the eye!
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 3:33 PM
Yes the eye offers brief respite from the storm, before wrapping in on itself again, cheers David
Chuuk Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 8:55 AM
So beautiful. Congratulations on you win, dear :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 10:39 AM
Heya Fin, thank you so much for stopping by with congrats, it’s much appreciated, cheers David
Peck Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 12:54 PM
That's just beautiful, David. Congrats!
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 2:10 PM
Thank you Ann, I really hope you are keeping well, cheers David
Wolf Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 7:55 PM
Sweetly spoken, David! :) gw
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 9:04 AM
Thank you Gershon, was great to get a good placement with this one, cheers David
Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Have a wonderful day writing away........................
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Heya Paula, last minute entry so was delighted it scored, thanks again for stopping by, cheers David
Sands Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 8:57 AM
Thank you Heidi, I was delighted with this one, cheers David
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 5:58 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, David -
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, hope you have a lovely weekend, cheers David
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 9:49 PM
Love your take on it. Big congrats
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 1:18 AM
Thank you Andrea right back at you, hope you’re keeping well, cheers David
Logan Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 10:23 AM
David, some of your writes require a shovel to dig a bit, but this one makes perfect sense to me, and I love it.
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 10:34 AM
Heya Jenna, yes indeed some of my stuff goes over peoples heads, I was gonna write something deeper, about no two people can see the exact same rainbow, but would probably have gotten lost in translation, I’m delighted you love this one, cheers David
Cunningham Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 8:55 AM
Seems you're on the right path David. Hope you're enjoying your travels. Tom
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Thanks Tom can’t go far wrong down here in Clare today, cold, dry, a few good breaks in the cloud, never got to stop off at Doolin, not enough hours in the day, cheers David
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