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Beneath the Rainbow

i walk in partial shade ~ either side the sky falls in semi cascade Beneath the Rainbow Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul Howmanysyllables (17) 03/02/23

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/1/2023 2:43:00 PM

Like standing in the eye of the hurricane. I was in the eye!

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/1/2023 3:33:00 PM

Yes the eye offers brief respite from the storm, before wrapping in on itself again, cheers David

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/10/2023 8:55:00 AM

So beautiful. Congratulations on you win, dear :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/10/2023 10:39:00 AM

Heya Fin, thank you so much for stopping by with congrats, it’s much appreciated, cheers David

Ann Peck

Date: 3/8/2023 12:54:00 PM

That's just beautiful, David. Congrats!

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2023 2:10:00 PM

Thank you Ann, I really hope you are keeping well, cheers David

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/5/2023 7:55:00 PM

Sweetly spoken, David! :) gw

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/6/2023 9:04:00 AM

Thank you Gershon, was great to get a good placement with this one, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/3/2023 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Have a wonderful day writing away........................

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/3/2023 9:28:00 AM

Heya Paula, last minute entry so was delighted it scored, thanks again for stopping by, cheers David

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/3/2023 6:43:00 AM

Congratulations for your win :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/3/2023 8:57:00 AM

Thank you Heidi, I was delighted with this one, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2023 5:58:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, David -

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/3/2023 8:56:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise, hope you have a lovely weekend, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2023 9:49:00 PM

Love your take on it. Big congrats

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/3/2023 1:18:00 AM

Thank you Andrea right back at you, hope you’re keeping well, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 3/2/2023 10:23:00 AM

David, some of your writes require a shovel to dig a bit, but this one makes perfect sense to me, and I love it.

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/2/2023 10:34:00 AM

Heya Jenna, yes indeed some of my stuff goes over peoples heads, I was gonna write something deeper, about no two people can see the exact same rainbow, but would probably have gotten lost in translation, I’m delighted you love this one, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/2/2023 8:55:00 AM

Seems you're on the right path David. Hope you're enjoying your travels. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/2/2023 10:30:00 AM

Thanks Tom can’t go far wrong down here in Clare today, cold, dry, a few good breaks in the cloud, never got to stop off at Doolin, not enough hours in the day, cheers David