Beneath the Rainbow

under the throng of colors arching across the sky, I stood enthralled.


March.2.2023 ~ Placed First~ Beneath the Rainbow Poetry Contest Sponsor- JCB Brul
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Peck Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 1:18 PM
Very lovely, Valsa! And it is enthralling to see a rainbow. Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 2:38 AM
Back to say, congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Chuuk Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Gorgeous! Congratulations on your win, Valsa :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your lovely write. Have a wonderful day writing away...............
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 6:06 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Valsa :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 10:00 PM
So nice, Valsa. Congrats
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 8:40 PM
Your few words powerfully painted great wonder and emotion Valsa! Lovely!
Poet Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 10:39 AM
Well-crafted Mnoku, Valsa. You conveyed a wonderful picture of the sky color. Congratulations on your top contest win.
Cunningham Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Nothing more beautiful to see Valsa, nature at its best. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Eslinger Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Oh, wow. So few words, chosen so perfectly to paint such a complete, nagical picture that suddenly i was under the rainbow and i giggled!
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 4:34 AM
Good one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Don't those rainbows catch our attention, and we stare in awe if possible. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 3:47 AM
- A beauty we are all enchanted by, Valsa ... lovely written :) - hugs
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