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Beneath the Rainbow

under the throng of colors arching across the sky, I stood enthralled. March.2.2023 ~ Placed First~ Beneath the Rainbow Poetry Contest Sponsor- JCB Brul

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Ann Peck

Date: 3/8/2023 1:18:00 PM

Very lovely, Valsa! And it is enthralling to see a rainbow. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2023 2:38:00 AM

Back to say, congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/3/2023 7:54:00 PM

Gorgeous! Congratulations on your win, Valsa :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/3/2023 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love your lovely write. Have a wonderful day writing away...............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2023 6:06:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Valsa :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2023 10:00:00 PM

So nice, Valsa. Congrats

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/2/2023 8:40:00 PM

Your few words powerfully painted great wonder and emotion Valsa! Lovely!

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/2/2023 10:39:00 AM

Well-crafted Mnoku, Valsa. You conveyed a wonderful picture of the sky color. Congratulations on your top contest win.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 3/2/2023 5:21:00 AM

Oh, wow. So few words, chosen so perfectly to paint such a complete, nagical picture that suddenly i was under the rainbow and i giggled!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/2/2023 5:21:00 AM

Nothing more beautiful to see Valsa, nature at its best. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2023 4:34:00 AM

Good one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Don't those rainbows catch our attention, and we stare in awe if possible. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2023 3:47:00 AM

- A beauty we are all enchanted by, Valsa ... lovely written :) - hugs