Beneath The Marmalade Sky

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The marmalade sky, aglow with setting sun, is fading
As the day slowly dwindles down to night. The sun
Increasingly losing its glimmer as it submerges behind
A bank of clouds. Descending yonder; sinking further
And further, into the horizon. Two lovers on a rendezvous
 Sit by the seaside admiring it in awe while it lasts
They snuggle up beneath the changing sky, waiting
 To gaze at the stars tonight


Date written and posted: 06/21/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/16/2018 10:46:00 PM
photo you selected is perfect for your beautiful descriptive poem. Congrats!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/17/2018 6:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, Barbara!:-)
Date: 7/16/2018 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/17/2018 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan!:-) Most obliged.
Date: 7/16/2018 5:23:00 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Edward - blessings and keep up the good work, my friend! :-)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/16/2018 5:56:00 AM
Thank you very much, Greg!:-) Much appreciated.
Date: 7/15/2018 3:19:00 PM
Sitting in silhouette with the sunset... Edward, your captivating poem is so incredibly romantic and so beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved win! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/15/2018 4:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan!:-) You're very kind!
Date: 7/15/2018 2:00:00 PM
a beautiful moment, described so well. congrats on your win :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/15/2018 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Casarah!
Date: 7/15/2018 8:00:00 AM
Very nice! Congratulations for your win Edward :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/15/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi!*Hugs*