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Beneath the Marmalade Sky

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The marmalade sky, aglow with the setting sun, is fading as the day slowly dwindles down to night. The sun increasingly losing its glimmer as it submerges behind a bank of clouds. Descending yonder; sinking further and further, into the horizon. Two lovers on a rendezvous sit by the seaside admiring it in awe while it lasts. They snuggle up beneath the changing sky, waiting to gaze at the stars tonight CONTEST NO 465,ANY FORM OR NONE,ANY THEME,UPTO A MAX OF 20 lines Winner(1st Place) Sponsored by: Brian Strand Date written and posted: 06/21/2018

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Date: 7/16/2018 10:46:00 PM
photo you selected is perfect for your beautiful descriptive poem. Congrats!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/17/2018 6:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, Barbara!:-)
Date: 7/16/2018 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/17/2018 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan!:-) Most obliged.
Date: 7/16/2018 5:23:00 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Edward - blessings and keep up the good work, my friend! :-)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/16/2018 5:56:00 AM
Thank you very much, Greg!:-) Much appreciated.
Date: 7/15/2018 3:19:00 PM
Sitting in silhouette with the sunset... Edward, your captivating poem is so incredibly romantic and so beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved win! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/15/2018 4:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan!:-) You're very kind!
Date: 7/15/2018 2:00:00 PM
a beautiful moment, described so well. congrats on your win :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/15/2018 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Casarah!
Date: 7/15/2018 8:00:00 AM
Very nice! Congratulations for your win Edward :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/15/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi!*Hugs*

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