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Beneath the Grass

The solemn air of deepened peace 
Peace beneath grass where you had lain,
Lain along angels' sacred field
Field upon which dreams were embalmed.



Contest of nette onclaud: Four Lines Only
Visual 3
Carly Lalion: 7th June, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Maverick Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 3:01 PM
Congratulations on your top spot Carly Joe..'
Trichet Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 1:58 AM
Congrats Carl, awesome write.
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June 12, 2015 at 7:38 PM
Congrats Carly, on your 4 lines win. SKAT
Merryman Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 5:47 PM
A wonderful write, Carly! Congrats on your well-deserved 1st place win! Love, Kim
Roberts Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 4:07 PM
Wow an excellent write well done....Seren
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