Beneath the Furrows Beneath the Lines

Beneath the deep furrows
and the facial lines
clear sparkling
cheeky little girls
playful eyes
still smile
and shine.





''Many a time when I have talked to old people who I love, about their childhood, suddenly
something magical happens. Their eyes sparkle, and they become children again.''



Peter Dome.copyright.2013. Dec.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Babcock Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 1:10 PM
Yes the memories come alive and seniors love to be asked questions of their childhood. I wonder if my eyes will sparkle at that time too. LOL love phyl
Dome Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 1:28 PM
Thank you. I love to talk to them whenever I get chance. It wasn't so much about the wrinkles, but the fact, we all have an inner child within us no matter what age.It's such a beautiful thing to see. take care. best wushes. Pete.
Dome Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 1:28 PM
Thank you. I love to talk to them whenever I get chance. It wasn't so much about the wrinkles, but the fact, we all have an inner child within us no matter what age.It's such a beautiful thing to see. take care. best wishes. Pete.
Crenshaw Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 8:52 PM
:-) yes
Dome Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 5:35 AM
Thank you so much. Best wishes. Pete.
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