Beneath The Clouds

Waves dance beneath the clouds,
tossing fish that fly high in the air. 
That hot storm was triggering foam
as square ripples erode the shore. 

Tossing fish that fly high in the air,
so enticing yet so far out of reach.
As square ripples erode the shore
designing art with their destruction. 

So enticing yet so far out of reach,
immune to the luster of seduction.
Designing art with their destruction,
a view undoubtably awe inspiring. 

Immune to the luster of seduction,
all of the seagulls know better. 
A view undoubtably awe inspiring,
the picture of complete disruption. 

All of the seagulls know better,
that hot storm was triggering foam.
The picture of complete disruption,
waves dance beneath the clouds.
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July 28, 2025 at 6:53 PM
Nice Pantoum, Melani, well-written, my friend. Have a pleasant week! Bill
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