Beneath Star Swept Sky

Beneath star swept sky,
                                        My darling and I
                                   Held hands in the breeze
                                            of the night
                                   We were still in our teens
                                      Dreams played out 
                                          hope's scenes
                                       And we held to the
                                         future so bright

                                    Love pulled like a rope
                                   Then I said, like a dope
                                  "You are like a Greek god 
                                              to me!"
                                      He sighed in my ear
                                   "No way my sweet dear!
                              In Jesus, my God is my hope!"

                                    His faith was so deep
                                In God's grace was steeped
                              And his faith brought my heart
                                         such great joy
                                       A vow and a ring,
                                        a hallowed thing
                                  And a King Who would 
                                        always us keep

                                   The babies came 'long
                                    Into our blessed song
                                  And the years turned to 
                                        decades So fast
                                  But my hearts in a whirl
                                       As it was as a girl
                                  In Grandpa's sweet arms
                                         Gram' belongs

                                    Our stories been told
                             Though young, we're quite old
                                   My precious sweet boy 
                                         and his bride
                                  As we stand 'neath the 
                                     stars with the hope
                                          that is ours
                                   In memories steeped
                                          side by side
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George Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 7:47 PM
A love that got matured into ripeness and continues to grow warmer and stronger. May God grant you many more years of blessed togetherness !
Legros Kelley Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 9:31 PM
Thank you Valsa, you're so precious <3 I pray we have many more years together as well. We've been married almost 45 years, and were married in our teens, I love him so much. It's not all been roses, there were many thorns in our lives together. Our early dreams didn't take in the hard times...but we've faced them together. Thank you so much for stopping by and for leaving your sweet comments, I so appreciate them and you <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 11:25 PM
I loved reading your love story BJ. My favorite stanza is your fourth. How quickly the years pass. A treasure! Thank you for your fine example. Blessings xxoo
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 2:08 AM
Thank you Connie, I appreciate your kind words <3 Yes, it's amazing how fast time flies. Blessings to you as well! :)
Dutta Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 8:18 PM
Really Nice and Romantic I also love poems that rhyme Poems that rhyme exhibit extra charm. Happy New Year
Dutta Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 8:17 PM
Really Nice and Romantic I also love poems that rhyme Poems that rhyme exhibit extra charm. Happy New Year
Dutta Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 8:17 PM
Really Nice and Romantic I also love poems that rhyme Poems that rhyme exhibit extra charm. Happy New Year
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 2:06 AM
Thank you Anisha, I so appreciate your kind words, Happy New Year to you as well :)
Edmonds  Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 12:17 PM
So beautiful and romantic, a lovely love story and what a poetic gift to your loved one…Belle
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 2:04 AM
Thank you so much Belle <3
Awtry Avatar
January 3, 2022 at 12:48 PM
This is a beautiful love story, the kind that lasts a lifetime. :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 3:16 PM
Thank you so much Awtry :)
Pandit Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 5:45 AM
Sweet, heartfelt memories--a lovely poem, BJ.
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 12:23 PM
Thank you so much Vijay, your words are so uplifting and encouraging. I just stopped over and read your poem, and it gave me heart. You are always so kind and it matters so very much in this world! Thank you for your sweet comment on my poem. My husband and I have a long, long memory together, but it feels strange to me it has really been as many years as it has been. Time has wings...it flies too quickly. From dreams to long memories!
Mcintosh Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 2:33 PM
Beautiful love story, my friend. I love it. God bless you always and Happy New Year 2022! Love, Gina
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 12:17 PM
Thank you so much Gina, we just celebrated our 45th Christmas together and we will be married 45 years next summer. Our first Christmas we had no gift for each other except acts of kindness. Mine was to wash his little sportscar, and his was washing the laundry, which was so hard. We washed our clothes by hand and hung them on the line to dry! It was an awesome gift to me. Many years of memories! Thank you for stopping by with your sweet uplifting words <3 Happy new year Gina! <3
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