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Life's struggles often lure me down dead end roads, littered with dangerous curves and stumbling blocks. You, my Heavenly angel, remove the heaviest loads, those burdens trying to keep me tied up in gridlocks. When darkness and temptation lay frigid fingers on me my mind becomes shadowed with sorrows and fears but your divine light shines bright so I can break free from anxieties and despair. My trepidation disappears. You are a gentle breeze, chasing gray clouds from the sky, a minstrel of lullabies, singing a troubled sheep to sleep, a butterfly on my shoulder when faith is in short supply, my comforter in times of need, wiping tears when I weep. In Scripture, God has written of your loving devotion. In your gentle hands I picture you offering me His Book. You are the righteous source of my spiritual emotion. Dear Angel, may I always receive your approving look. Under your celestial wings I find refuge and protection, keeping me sheltered from harm and turning evil away. You bring peace to my heart because you are a reflection of God's mercy. I pray that near me you will always stay. September 7th, 2017

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Date: 11/7/2017 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Lin - nicely done, my friend - this is gorgeous, love it! :-)
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Date: 11/7/2017 6:00:00 AM
Thanks, but I should've been wise enough to enter one that he'd already praised like the top 3. Yours was really fantastic.
Date: 11/7/2017 12:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Lin on your win.
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Date: 11/7/2017 5:59:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 11/6/2017 9:13:00 PM
Congratulations Lin on your fantastic win with your uplifting and ethereal write. Exquisite!
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Date: 11/7/2017 5:59:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Susan.
Date: 11/6/2017 8:24:00 PM
Congrats, Lin!
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Date: 11/7/2017 5:59:00 AM
Thanks, Dale.
Date: 11/6/2017 7:58:00 PM
Beautiful writing Lin, you never disappoint congrats on another win!
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Date: 11/7/2017 5:59:00 AM
Thank you, John.
Date: 9/12/2017 6:06:00 PM
Great poem--lovely, well-written, and reverent, Lin! Janice
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Date: 11/7/2017 5:58:00 AM
Thanks, Janice.
Date: 9/8/2017 11:19:00 PM
The words just roll of the tongue, a lovely read!
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Date: 11/7/2017 5:58:00 AM
Thanks, Art.
Date: 9/8/2017 4:04:00 AM
This is so beautiful Lin, I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! You have delighted me by this incredibly harmonious piece! What an astounding write my friend, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/8/2017 2:15:00 PM
Thanks so much, Russell. I'm happy to see you back and writing your lovely comments.
Date: 9/7/2017 6:47:00 PM
I'm glad your poem portrayed Angels as companions and helpers rather than lofty Angelic beings that just float around in an ethereal sky...that's how I attacked this contest also...good luck dear, poet
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Date: 9/8/2017 2:15:00 PM
God would never make useless spiritual beings, would he? Thanks for liking this one. I'll read yours, Frederic.
Date: 9/7/2017 9:44:00 AM
A beautiful prayer Lin
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Date: 9/7/2017 11:03:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Tim.
Date: 9/7/2017 9:36:00 AM
Beautiful and uplifting Lin and you are an angel with your encouragement and friendship:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/7/2017 11:02:00 AM
You are such a kind-hearted friend and also angelic to me, Jan. Thank you.
Date: 9/7/2017 9:13:00 AM
An Angelic beauty my friend...best wishes Lin... and I don't think you need any luck lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/7/2017 11:01:00 AM
Thanks very much, WW.
Date: 9/7/2017 8:58:00 AM
So very nice Lin. A beautiful and comforting poem. :)
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Date: 9/7/2017 11:01:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Heidi

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