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Beneath a Western Sky

A Queens' jewelled hand Lifted slowly, pointed to the Western land For, in the West Stars were seen Precious things Hidden Waiting to be found In the forests of richest green A star Beneath a Western sky A journey With you Deep in to the night A Queens' jewelled hand Lifted slowly To a Western land Where so many stars Waiting to be found Stars for you and I To be found Beneath a Western sky The journey with you To find this precious thing Of a star... Beneath a Western sky Colour too So many nights to pass For, in a Western sky You and I, Will find a star Waiting to be seen In the forest of richest green To the edge of night You found.. What you were looking for.. In the west Under starlight Hand in hand Walking through Western land I followed a star... Found in a Western land That star.... Was you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 11/30/2008 4:08:00 AM
Matthew - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:19:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:35:00 PM
Awesome write and use of the form, Matthew. It definitely sings ... smile ... Congratulations on being a "first round survivor" and good luck in the PoetrySoup contest!!
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:23:00 PM
Matthew - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/30/2008 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations on making the semi finals . God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:25:00 PM
Hi Matthew Congrats on your amazing poem making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/9/2008 8:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature of the week, Matthew. Lainie
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Date: 8/5/2008 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on having your wonderful poem featured once again. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/4/2008 9:56:00 AM
great flow in this poem - very romantic - congrats on being featured
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Date: 8/4/2008 9:00:00 AM
Touching and romantic. 'Struck me.
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Date: 8/4/2008 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations Matthew on the refeaturing of your poem. Vince
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