Beneath a Saffron Sky

I stand upon a lilac beach
Beneath a saffron sky
the ocean laps around my feet
I'm here again, but why

The trees of frozen fire
line the quiet shore
The second sun just rising
A sight that I adore

A stranger stands beside me
he's pointing out to sea
I shade my eyes from the glare
and wonder what could be

He walks into the water
and beckons me to follow
I trip and stumble on a rock
My heart, it's full of sorrow

Each time that I return here
I hope to see what lies
Beyond the waves where he walks
Beneath those saffron skies





Contest : Dreams
4th Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/18/2011 4:12:00 AM
I needed to read something like this today.. Thank you Nick :) beautiful write!!
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Date: 11/12/2011 6:21:00 PM
Saffron Skies gave me a vivid picture with a cool tale! I have noticed such a difference in the sky lately. The clouds are so feathery and low with zig zags. U? I see why you won in this contest!
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Date: 11/11/2011 7:20:00 AM
Amazing Nick xx
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:43:00 PM
Lost track of you Nick, glad I found you writing your lovely magic. The color is so striking and that touch of mystery makes this an outstanding write.
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Date: 11/5/2011 1:01:00 AM
Wow! Apt and striking: the beach, the sorrow, a mixed grill of reality. Tor.
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Date: 11/2/2011 5:06:00 PM
Excellent poetry! Wow! This one is so sorrowfully magical. Always, Laura
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Date: 10/13/2011 9:49:00 PM
Well done with this one Nick. I often see strangers in my dreams and wonder what that means....cheers Margaret
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Date: 10/10/2011 7:46:00 PM
This is simply beautiful.. sad, but beautiful... love it a lot.. take care..
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Date: 10/9/2011 5:23:00 PM
Congrats Nick on an outstanding win with this incredible entry luv... awesome piece ..enjoy..
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Date: 10/9/2011 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Frank's "Dream" contest Nick. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:53:00 AM
Wow. Great imagery Nick. Nicely done. Congratulations
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Date: 10/8/2011 3:47:00 PM
beautiful lines Nick of wonderful rhyme to tell this tale ... the beach is my domain all Summer long and I would live on the beach if I could..the ocean is so impressive and awesome as this piece..luv..
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Date: 10/7/2011 9:44:00 AM
Beauty of a dream Nick. Tony
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