Beneath a Blanket of Snow

The land lies beneath a blanket of snow
The river is frozen and does not flow
The leaves have fallen and the trees are bare
Winter is dressed like a maiden so fair

The land lies beneath a blanket of snow
Its beauty and fairness blossom and grow
And yet there's sadness and grief in the air
Sadness is dressed like a maiden so fair

The past lies beneath a blanket of snow
It's frozen but still there, and does not flow
The past is now gone, but memories are there
The past is dressed like a maiden so fair

My heart lies beneath a blanket of snow
My tears are frozen and do not flow
My grief is silenced and my mind is bare
Sorrow is dressed like a maiden so fair

My heart lies beneath a blanket of snow
My soul is frozen but Jesus knows
He knows my sorrows and His hand is there
His hand guides me when my feelings are bare

My life lies beneath the great Tree that glows
On that Tree, my Saviour's blood streams and flows
My sins have fallen for my sins He bears
The Tree is dressed like a maiden so fair

My life lies beneath the great Throne that glows
From that Throne, the River of life flows
Jesus sits enthroned and white robes He wears
Joy is mine for in His Kingdom I share

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Date: 1/10/2019 9:48:00 PM
Ps. This one goes in my faves list...!
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Joanne Liaw
Date: 1/10/2019 10:00:00 PM
Such an honour. Thank you!
Date: 1/10/2019 9:47:00 PM
The repetition in your poem greatly emphasizes the strong emotions and was very effective. I, too, am a believer in Jesus, and was happy to see His glory magnified in your great poetry! Well done! :)
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Joanne Liaw
Date: 1/10/2019 10:01:00 PM
It's so wonderful to meet you, sis. Despite the grief and brokenness in this life, we always have hope in Christ.
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