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Beneath


Beneath


Beneath my tall pine tree,
below an engraved stone,
buried is my sweet friend
beloved for twenty years;
been missing him so long.
Beside his grave, sad and
bereft....I hear soft purrs.


Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Contest: Pleiades B
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Judged: 08/19/2016
 
Note: “beloved” has the strange property of 
having two different acceptable pronunciations: 
(two syllables, pronounced like “bi-loved”) and
(three syllables, pronounced like “bi-love-id”).
Reference: http://linguisticmystic.com/page9/
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Scars Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 6:35 AM
oh Sandra, how sad, yet written so beautifully.. congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 8:47 PM
a well deserved win, Sandra! Congrats.
Callus Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 12:59 PM
A sad, lovely poem, Sandra. Twenty years is a long time, no wonder he's missed so much! Congratulations on this deserved win. Regards // paul
Krampe Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Congrats, Sandra. Sad and beautiful.
Hamilton Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Congrats on another fine win!
Singh Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Congrats!
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 4:17 AM
Touching and very lovley Sandra! I am happy to see this high on the winning list! Congratulations my friend! : ) 7
Daniel Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 2:50 AM
Back to tell my congratulations:)
May Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Congrats on a fine win Sandra
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 7:47 PM
Sandra, congrats on your 2nd place win! Your poem really touched me as we had to put our cat down last week. I love your last line. Blessings!
Arnone Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Bereft, bereft. Everyone's using my word, bereft. I am ... bereft! ;-) Condolences to your departed feline, Sandra....
Daniel Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 5:58 AM
Beautiful:) A winner in my eyes:)
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 6:47 AM
- Touching beautifully, Sandra - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:06 PM
oh my, such a sad one. and so well done!!
Troutman Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 3:06 PM
Very moving.
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 11:44 AM
aww Sandra - lovely memories of a cherished pet:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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