Ben Franklin

Old Ben Franklin
the printing business he was in
I wish he was alive so that he
could print his picture on more hundreds for me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 11:30 PM
a small suggestion. Line three: just say:. . . so that he/ then on the last line begin: could print his picture on more hundreds for me. There is no reason to invert the word could and put it before me in line three. This is excellent clerihew. you have the knack!
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 11:29 PM
hahaha, I wish he would do it for me as well.
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